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TravelingDimensions
Joined: 2012-06-17Posts: 8410 months agoI won't be reviewing yours since you failed to get the secret code and your story is a romance. You obviously didn't read my post. @XxAshleyRosexX
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JohnMurrayMcKay
Joined: 2012-04-24Posts: 419610 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/5688490-the-n-chronicles
In a world gone wrong, Where the monsters of our deepest nightmares have come alive.
One girl is on a journey to find Sanctuary in America.
This is the N chronicles.
Favourite food: Hotdogs
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gleak1
Joined: 2012-08-02Posts: 3010 months ago@KyWriter http://www.wattpad.com/story/1811859-the-moment-of-impact Hey please critique my story, I'd really love to know what you think
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xLostxPrincex
Joined: 2012-06-20Posts: 65910 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1817366-beauty-unknown
I don't really like food but...ice cream? :)
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TravelingDimensionsJoined: 2012-06-17Posts: 8410 months ago
This is amazing. Thank you. @AflyingMonkey
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CreativeLizzy
Joined: 2011-07-30Posts: 20310 months agoI am doing some major re-editing of my story, so all advice and comments would be highly appreciated! Oh, and I love spaghetti! By the way, the story involves a student in highschool, but the main focus of attention is else where, so I hope you still consider reading my story (No teenage romance is involved, I promise). Here's the link to Crazed,http://www.wattpad.com/1902583-crazed-chapter-one @KyWriter
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AflyingMonkey
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Tri3LyriX
Joined: 2011-08-03Posts: 158810 months agoCheck it out = ]
Genre : Action /Fantasy
Summary : The Seven Deadly Sins have awoken and are now in search of “The Lost Banished Heir”, Cain who would be the key to their ascension to power. Cain’s incarnation, a 19 year old boy; who on his 20th birthday would become the most wanted human among these 7 demons. Will the sins claim his immortal soul or will he over come the darkness and temptation of each sin and rise with new found virtues.
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TheGreatDance
Joined: 2012-02-27Posts: 127110 months ago@KyWriter Completed Science fiction/adventure/romance story, currently entered in the 2012 Watty Awards so all support is highly appreciated. Thanks! :)
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1048665-rules-were-made-to-be-broken-watty-awards-2012
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JordayDawn
Joined: 2012-07-13Posts: 84810 months ago
Haley Kynee lives a happy life with her husband Kaden. Until one day when her parents decide to visit her and want to take her back to California for a week for her sisters wedding. Kaden doesn't like this idea and he will do anything to stop her from going. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1712990-love-is-in-the-attic
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_football_fan
Joined: 2012-04-22Posts: 23610 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/3426606-achieving-your-goals-watty-awards-2012-chapter-one When your dreams become everything, how far will you go to follow them? Meet Ashleighn, obsessed with football and willing to put everything on hold until she reaches the top. But will a chance at love change the path she is taking or will she miss it completely?
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IzzyHeartsOreos
Joined: 2011-07-22Posts: 80910 months agoNo idea if you'll give me feedback for a poem but I'm hoping you will. http://www.wattpad.com/6308233-shadows-%26-angels-atty-awards-couplet-inescapable?d=ud
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_Angelsword
Joined: 2012-07-29Posts: 9610 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/user/Angelsword
It's called More Than Beautiful. It's an Adventure/Mystery. So yeah.
Oh and my favorite food is pumpkin pie.
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just4laughs
Joined: 2011-12-01Posts: 6810 months ago@KyWriter - hi XD My story is NOT a romance but it is about a girl who is in high school but it isn't about her high school life. Thank you so much! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1675917-inbetween
My favourite food is BUTTER CHICKEN XD
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JDmichael
Joined: 2012-08-02Posts: 29010 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1819605-the-prophecy-watty-awards-2012
The year is 2021 “The Prophecy” (By Jordan Bryant) takes place inside London, both above and below ground. Society has been firmly split between those who choose to live underground known as "Rodents" in the anarchic world of the Underground postings known as "The Network". However, they have to fight off constant attacks from the organized raiding parties and bandits, who reside above ground. Also, living primarily above ground is “The Collective”, who oppose the Network and are trying to destabilize them from the inside using spies and informants to undermine their operations. Religion plays a major part, with a twisted form of Christianity overwhelming the weak nation of new – world born people.
The main character "Lozada" lives at Square One, at a time when the civil war between the Collective and the Network is at its peak. “The Frenzy”, a rogue alliance loosely associated with the Collective Leader, kidnap Lozada and his men, they aim to sell him off as a slave or a bribe in a deal with the Collective. However, the Frenzy’s main intentions are to buy young exuberant scavengers, to maximise chances of locating “The Prophecy”.
All assemblages get mention of this Prophecy, an ancient remnant of ancestral knowledge created by “The Masters”; a book that would eventually steer civilisation from a crazy frantic world to a new phase of existence. Lozada and his carefully assigned organization made of him and three other audacious characters swiftly set off to find the book and create a divine group of rational people to prevent the prophecy going into insane minds such as the Frenzy. But as creatures lurk in the shadows and many extreme groups will murder any resistance, an anxious hunt for the so called prophecy begins which will test the boundaries of insanity, power, and corruption… [edit]
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1819605-the-prophecy-watty-awards-2012
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Raven_Lark
Joined: 2012-08-04Posts: 21410 months agoHere are some of my poems. Feel free to leave comments and vote.
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1849324-thoughtless-wanderer
http://www.wattpad.com/6316615-ghosts-of-time
http://www.wattpad.com/6320577-vertigo
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1849928-sleep
Thank you.
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