Why is your story not getting reads?

@kaizeechuu08 I only do one story per person. Sorry.

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OH, it's ok :)) Anyways, thanks for the review!! I'll do my best to improve my description.

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@fantablouis77 Hello! :D Spoons are icky http://www.wattpad.com/story/800730-better-than-ever

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Hi! It's a short story, four pages long. I'm looking for honest critiques, so do be harsh if you don't like it. Here: http://Wattpad.com/6039318-love-that-lasts Love That Lasts. Thank you so much if you do read it. (: Could you post the feedback under the story instead of it on this thread? (:

..Jeez, spoons are icky. No wonder Liam fears them.

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Spoons are icky(:

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1801188-vital-signs

Two pages, one chapter. With only four reads, I think it meets the qualifications(:

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@fantablouis77 Spoons are icky.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1705387-ace

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Bump!

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Bump again -_-

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@fantablouis77 did you see mine? i'm guessing you didn't. Spoons are icky http://www.wattpad.com/story/1557254-the-girl-formula-about-a-boy

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@Suicidal_Optomists_ Yes, I did. Check your story ;)

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Bumpity, bump, bump. First come first serve.

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@fantablouis77 okay, thanks :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/6140149-the-day-of-the-blood And spoons.....they be very icky.

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Spoons are icky. That's why I prefer sporks.

Here's my story for you: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1028067-my-loquacious-friend

I know that the second chapter is a little rushed. Thank you for making this and taking your time to help. ^-^

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Spoons are Icky?

I'm somewhat new to wattpad. I have had my account for years, but I haven't really read anything till last month. This is my first attepmt at writing a story. It's not very good, but I'm trying. I really want feedback and some criticism. I don't mind if it's negative. No one seems to want to read it and there aren't many views yet. I don't care much about numbers, I just want to work on my writing.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1799395-untitled

Thanks in advance- Whether you do decide to read it or not. (Though I hope you do :D)

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@fantablouis77 Spoons are icky?? hahaha i'll post two of my stories and you can just decide which is the one you want to read(: i'll post description too(: thank you http://www.wattpad.com/story/1661546-meet-the-carters

The Carters, a big family of two parents, Taylor and Benjamin, and 19 children, don't get along as much as they wish. But what happens when their parents decide to take them on a family vacation they don't want to go? Will they learn to bond? Will it change their lives? Will they actually like their vacation? Only the Carters know, and they are sharing their story with you

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1144157-justice

Stella, a fifteen year old girl, had gotten some bad news. It seems that her best friend, Mason, was killed after arriving from a party last night. Stella takes the news very badly. She doesn't only get's depressed, but is also willing to find the murderer and kill him. She might think the murderer is somoene she doesn't know. But does she?

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Spoons. They be icky. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1752964-whispers @fantablouis77 Thanks in advance.

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Spoons are icky, forks be.. sticky? Knives be licky? Eh, here's the link.. I want to know how I can make this better. keep in mind it's a short stoy. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1679067-the-best-dream-ever-a-pokemon-story @fantablouis77

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Spoons are icky

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1066533-operation-amnesia

please help po :) thank you so much!

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@fantablouis77 Spoons are icky! Please critic mine and i hope you can be as blunt as you want!(:

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1663503-from-that-moment-on-girlxgirl

Stacey was fearless; she wouldn't flinch even at the scariest thing you can name. Anything but one thing. Love. What happens when Belle, the new girl in school, crosses paths with Stacey and Stacey finds herself unknowingly falling in love? Worse of all, with a girl? Will she try to escape or face the truth? Will Belle accept her as she is or reject her, even as a friend?

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@fantablouis77 By the looks of things it might tae you a few years to get to my story but it's called Alive Again http://www.wattpad.com/story/1498987-alive-again

and by the way don't even mention spoons to me because they are so totally icky. Ps; why don't you lie spoons?

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Hi, been a member for some time now but just finished a story >.< anyway, like everyone else, I need someone to read it and tell me what you think about it and so I can make it better...

http://www.wattpad.com/story/946982-surrogate-soul

Please be gentle with the comments :P Thanks :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1705387-ace Enjoy

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@fantablouis77 Hi there! :) I'm pretty new to Wattpad, but I have a few chapters up. By the looks of it, it'll take a while for you to get to my story, but that's cool :) I'm looking for very honest, very real critique, so thank you for any feedback you might give me :) Here you go! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1757079-clawed-and-taloned

Genre: Fantasy/Teen fiction

Summary: Wren is a young orphan in the theocratic city of Dawncaster, making a modest living quietly on her own. Her uncertain but simple life is soon jeopardized after stumbling upon a malicious conspiracy, causing the death of a local resident and the mutilation of an old friend.

Thanks again!

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@fantablouis77 Oh! Also! Spoons are icky :p

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