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skylark698
Joined: 2012-03-14Posts: 589 months agoI will be truthful with you in the following genres: romance, teen fiction, historical fiction, humour, vampire and werewolf and poetry as well.
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Weareallmadheremia
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skylark698Joined: 2012-03-14Posts: 589 months ago
@miarosa2011 its gud up till now....but its only the start yo shoild try giving it an unexpected twist and try making a more catchy name. other than that its really gr8.
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WeareallmadheremiaJoined: 2012-05-29Posts: 629 months ago
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_TheDarkestLight
Joined: 2011-10-06Posts: 319 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1540425-the-last-hunt
Hunting meant everything to Ruin. It wasn't just his job; it was a way of life. Training his entire life to catch criminals. Slowly building a reputation as one of the best Bounty Hunters in the world, and finally joining the two best hunters in the world. Everything was perfect... Perfect things never last. Some despised the hunters, but one hated them above all. As his plan begins to unfold. Hunters become the hunted. Can Ruin and his friends save themselves and many others? Or will this be the last hunt?
Thanks! I hope you enjoy!
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MorganaTheWitch
Joined: 2012-06-08Posts: 8329 months ago@skylark698 Hello! I've got one fantasy/romance story and a collection of poems that I'd love your feedback on :) Thank you!
The collection: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1562098-fragments-from-a-scattered-mind The story: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1493711-head-over-heels
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ARyding
Joined: 2011-03-06Posts: 28359 months ago@skylark698 This is a short story that I am entering in the Watty's! I would love to know what you think but please don't vote unless you really think I deserve to win. :)
It is not your normal teen cliche romance. It explores the reasons for life and I can promise your heart will break by the end. :)
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LittleBlueAuri
Joined: 2012-05-11Posts: 1809 months ago
Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1765267-ballet-baby
Summary: Rose Allester, has always know that one day she was going to be a Prima Ballerina. And all the eighteen years she's been alive she's been working towards that goal. Just when she thinks that all her work is about to pay off she meets Noah. Noah Evers is her first and only one night stand, or so she thought. What happens when Rose pass out during practice and is rushed to the emergency room only to be told that she is pregnant? And there is only one possible father, the guy who took her v-card, the one and the only, Noah Evers. Will things work out between Rose and Noah? Or will it all become the worst nightmare of Rose's life?
Please & Thank you! Its teen fiction & romance.
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CocoDream
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JennCara
Joined: 2010-08-20Posts: 1209 months ago
Link: http://www.wattpad.com/5821988-umbra
Summary: Gracelynn Daniels is a girl set on self destruction, due to depression after witnessing her fathers suicide at fifteen. Seven months later she realizes she had lost one of the best things in her life, Adrian, and is determined to rebuild her life. But a fresh start means a new school, two hundred miles away in the Cheshire countryside away from Adrian and her past. Determined to be successful in her aim of happiness she throws herself into the new way of life meeting quixotic, confusing Zeph Ellis along the way. There's a connection instantly, but two questions: How old is this connection and is it safe?
Thank you if you read it!
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SugaHoneyDip
Joined: 2012-05-26Posts: 14339 months agoI'm looking for an honest opinion on my story...I think it could be better...please check it out and COMMENT, FAN, VOTE if you like. I'll do the same for yours.
WHAT IF EVERYTHING YOU KNEW WAS A LIE?
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1623201-jezebel
Genre: Fantasy #64 / Watty Awards 2012 #94
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Maddie_2297
Joined: 2012-03-17Posts: 409 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1216544-the-perfect-summer It is finally summer break for Tara Williams and her friends, which means California. Every year for as long as Tara can remember her family and friends have been going to California for summer vacation. This year it is just Tara and her friends and she intends to make it the perfect summer, which may include falling in love. Will she find her true love in California or could he have been standing right in front of her this whole time? Thanks (:
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LuvCats
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CeeBella
Joined: 2012-06-08Posts: 28819 months ago@skylark698 Romance :3
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1582412-cinderella%27s-revenge
At 18 most girls just want to go out and have fun, that is what goes on in the mind of a normal 18 year old... but not Vivian Banks. Revenge is the only thing that can possibly make her happy, and who could blame her? After seeing her mother killed in front of her eyes when she was only five and the added bonus of having her Aunt Emily and Zarah treat her like a slave, she is determined to see her revenge through. Add to that Jonathan, who broke her heart at the time when she needed him most and you have yourself a woman set for a lifetime of revenge. After a total change in appearance, she is ready to pick them off one by one, making them know the pain she went through but can Zarah’s boyfriend change all of that? Is it happily ever after, or is this Cinderella too broken to be fixed?
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_Mariahoniell7
Joined: 2012-01-13Posts: 1499 months ago=) thank you, it's only two chapters.
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ElectricAlligator
Joined: 2012-01-23Posts: 1399 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1403696-guns-and-roses Title: Guns and Roses Genre: Romance/ Teen fiction Could you please critique for me ? Please note some mild swear words have been used basically since my main character Alexis is awfully rude and I have potrayed gang life in this book. :D
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MorganaTheWitchJoined: 2012-06-08Posts: 8329 months ago
@skylark698 Hi! I've got a paranormal/romance story that's only a chapter so far. Could you please give me some honest feedback on it? :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1622134-memento-mori
Thank you!
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sarbowen
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Lyliss
Joined: 2012-07-20Posts: 1859 months agoHey, I'm looking for honest feedback. I've only posted the first three chapters of this story so far. Any criticism is greatly appreciated. :) It is a romance/teen fiction.
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1753383-the-kissin%27-game
Thank you so much in advance!
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Veritable
Joined: 2011-06-13Posts: 10639 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/5036768-felicity-surprised "Felicity" The path of love is never easy, especially when it's been forced on you by a fairy with a gun. Sabrina Stone Steeples, a spiteful stain upon society must keep romantic mad girl, Elizabeth Maria Tethers happy to avoid execution but that's the least of his problems. With murders, paranormal outbreaks, young crime lords, plotting agents, apocalyptic clubs and super science, can Sabrina change himself for the better as the world around him changes its self for the wilder... thank you for reading.
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_HappyToBeWhoIAmJoined: 2012-04-11Posts: 539 months ago
Could you please critique my story
Title: Hidden Side
genre: werewolf/romance
Chapter: 16 (ongoing)
Plot: Anna White was known as the lonely 14 year old girl who kept to herself in her small town. With only her dad and a few friends, she really didn't have anyone who cared. When her dad goes missing and she starts to see changes in herself which aren't human....
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skylark698Joined: 2012-03-14Posts: 589 months ago
This message is To all requests:
I will read each and everyone of your stories one by one anad i will definitely vote if its worth it. Just give me some time cause i have a lot to read now. I will read and comment according to the order of the requests. Thnx though for replying so abundabtly.:) Btw most of u also posted your books for critiquing in the other discussion i started so i will reply to your requests in that discusion.
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victoriarosetaylor
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ScarlettEDe
Joined: 2012-07-18Posts: 1939 months agoShe wants to forget... He wants to remember...
She spends her nights drinking and partying, trying to forget who she is. He spent four months in a coma and does not remember the last 2 years. She wants to erase her past and start over. He would do anything to remember his...
The struggle of two young people, trying to move forward when everything is holding them back. As they learn to understand each other, they also find something they didn't know they needed to let go of their past : love. A story about letting go of the things that hurt you and holding on to everything else
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This is your classic boy meets girl story. Vincent is sitting at a coffee shop, reading a book. All of a sudden, Harper walks in, dripping wet from the pouring rain. He offers his handkerchief to her, not knowing that it will be the start of their love story. Vince does all the romantic things, like in the movies. But, as said in the title, he doesn't get the ending he expects.
It's got romance, tidbits of comedy, and some drama.
I hope you like it. Thank you! ((:
This is a story about a guy who found love through hate. What happens when the governor's rebel son falls in love? A lot of things. But you can have the pleasure of finding out for yourself.
It's only three pages but I hope you like it. Thank you! ((:
Cairo Ocampo was Dune Tomas' first love, first boyfriend, and first kiss. Unfortunately, Cai doesn't remember any of this because it all happened seven years ago in kindergarten. He and his family has since moved abroad. But now he is coming back. Dune still has everything he gave her, especially his break-up note.
It's only six pages right now. ((:
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