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Yay! Critique time!

Okay so here's the deal. I like to give out nice, long, juicy critiques. I also do not sugar coat in any way. I like to help people improve, so I'm probably going to have much more 'to fix' in my list than nice stuff.

If that's okay with you, grand!

I also will not give out free critiques. I would like to get a good critique in return, on this story: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1653378-flight It's only one chapter, so obviously, comment on that. I will notice when you /have/, because you will have put the password 'darling' in the comment somewhere. It would also be helpful if you put the story you want me to critique on this thread, so I know where to go. ;)

I will also only critique one chapter, because I want to be able to get to more than one of you. XD

Anyway, post and comment away!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1540425-the-last-hunt

Life is good for Ruin. It was a small pack, but the best Hunters around. Tensions ran high, and the pack went from three to two, and if that wasn't enough someone was killing all of the best Shifters... The Hunt is on, but who is the hunter...and who is being hunted? Thanks And I Hope You Enjoy!

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@AlexaFragile Completed Science Fiction/Adventure/Romance, currently entered in the 2012 Watty Awards so all support is highly appreciated. :) Thanks! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1048665-rules-were-made-to-be-broken-watty-awards-2012 darling. Could you critique the first chapter, NOT the preface? Thanks!

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Heyy I would really really appreciate if you could take a few moments to look at the prologue of my story – The Fated. I want to know if it’s intriguing to readers? If you don’t like it – tell me. If you do – tell me. I really want to make it as good as it can be. Thank you for taking the time to read this message ~Ellie x http://www.wattpad.com/4054216-the-fated-prologue Evie’s nightmares are becoming increasingly vivid – the four women, the icy stare, the pain. Almost real. As Evie becomes more and more inquisitive the behaviour of her friends and family changes. They are hiding something from her, something dangerous. She begins to question; where is the line between dreams and reality?

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hey there- i'm new to wattpad and would love some critique. i've uploaded the opening to my story and would love any critique you can give :)

Thanks http://www.wattpad.com/5794046-coinholder

It's no secret Cassie's mum is struggling to bring up her and her little sister Bo single handedly, so when Cassie receives an unexpected fully paid scholarship she can't bring herself to turn it down - no matter how much she wants to. But Cassie get's more than she bargained for when she arrives at her new school. She finds herself in the centre of a world she never even knew existed, with powers she doesn't fully understand, and it seems that all hope of peace among the elemental Coinholders has been pinned upon her shoulders. There's only one thing Cassie knows for certain - she can't do it alone. But who does she trust in a world where emotion can be manipulated, feelings can be controlled and thoughts can be tampered with?

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@AlexaFragile You sound like a really good editor! Could you help me out on my story, November 17? Mine's short as well. Thanks! I'll read your story too!

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@TheDarkestLight You have to critique mine first.

@TheGreatDance @EscapingOurReality @anna_aaron @JuliaT14 I have seen your comments and will now get to yours. ^^ Thanks guys.

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@JuliaT14 Can you give me the link here?

I saw it in your comment, but I want them all together.

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Sure thing! It's right here: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1663901-november-17th .

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@JuliaT14 Thanks. ^^ Going to see it now.

@TheGreatDance Finished! Lovely work!

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@anna_aaron Finished! <3

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@EscapingOurReality Finished yours as well!

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@JuliaT14 Done. ^^

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Next Stop - http://www.wattpad.com/5668105-next-stop

While waiting for the train, Morgan dooms himself by falling in love with the world around him.

My first story on Wattpad - I hope you enjoy!

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@AlexaFragile done (darling)

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@WroughtTales Finished. And a hat off to you, sir. I was wowed.

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thank you! that's very kind! I hope you share it! @AlexaFragile

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bump!

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I just started my story and I don't have any others up yet but if anyone could tell me if it is a good start I would loooove it! :) Im also new here and if someone could tell me how to get people reading my stories that would be amazing

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@dontloosewhoyouare I'll look at yours if you look at mine. ^^

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