Real and Honest Critiques...(read description)

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First of all, if you are one of those who get super offended from honest critiques, kindly step away.

Second of all, I am here to give you real critiques, not random comments for you. My critiques are real and honest, and they will be around 2000 words. So, if you're just here to get more people to read your story, kindly step away.

Thirdly, I will be pretty darn harsh. If I like it, I'll say I like it, and if I don't I'll also say that, but then I'll give you a reason why. I will also offer help with just about anything, but my strongest point is working with the plot and flow.

If you still wish to have an honest critique, then please do comment below. So please leave a comment below, and to stop spammers, please post the word, 'Impossible'. And with this offer, I also offer that if I did enjoy your book, that I may add it to my library, and I will almost DEMAND that you let me know, on my profile page when you upload a new chapter. I'm pretty darn honest like that.

Update: I will NOT read horror, or rated-R stuff. Also, no book covers. I'm not one of those SYS club people. Just a summary will do, I can just about guarantee you that by looking at your book cover won't exactly make me want to read it. A well written book is what hooks me in, not a book cover. =] Thanks for understanding. So you can just save your book covers and those banners and fancy stuff for the SYS people.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/63553-the-demon%27s-host

impossible! And or

http://www.wattpad.com/story/434030-the-dangerously-beautiful thanks!

the second one is shorter

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@Angel_Eyes24 I offer one at a time, and I only want to critique the work that YOU think is the best, so which ever one you like better, I suppose. =]

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@AngelaWu okay, well then the first one, it needs some help.....O_O

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@AngelaWu Impossible! I have a few, I'm reaLy not sure which one to pick, so I'll let you decide. Pick whichever. :) BSOL- Book One of the Angel Series: http://www.wattpad.com/story/932892-bsol-the-first-book-in-the-angel-series Genre: Science Fiction/Teen fic-In the year 2020, Essy has already faced divorce, death, and the many horrors of WWIII. But suddenly, everything starts to become perfect... Too Perfect. Through all the deception and lies, Essy knows that she has been taken someplace that is definitely not earth...

KrawL: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1403589-krawl Genre: Horror/Teen Fiction- Gianna lives on Murdock Street with but one other place, a science lab where they are conducting experiments to make "Superbugs", which go horribly wrong, making them become flesh eating monsters. This is the story of when those monsters escaped. (Horror #10!!)

Euphoria: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1573030-%7Eeuphoria%7E Genre: Fantasy- In another dimension, there exists a perfect land called Euphoria. Everything about it is flawless, except for one very prominent Princess: Violet, who is a little person. She had always grown up hearing the fairy tales about "earth", but when two scientists become trapped, she is in for a wild ride.

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@AngelaWu Hey, i'd like to offer up my co-writen completed novel :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/673631-the-urbem-completed

Impossible :)

Thank you in advance

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@Angel_Eyes24 Alright, I'll head over in a few.

@dreamsmadereal I think Euphoria sounds the most interesting to me, so I will head over sometime today or tomorrow. Depends on much time I have.

@Spelling_Bee Alright, same with you, I will have to see how much time it takes me to critique, but hopefully by tomorrow.

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@AngelaWu impossible

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1685023-smile-you%27re-beautiful

You know that girl you called fat? She’s been starving herself for God knows how long.

You know that chick you called emo? She’s been battling depression for years.

You know that gal you bullied and whenever she would cry you would say “Aww is little Missy going to go cry to her mommy and daddy?” Her parents died a couple years ago and she’s still grieving their death.

The tiniest thing can hurt a person beyond words, but it can also shed light to a dark tunnel. This is Missy Vega’s story about loss, hurt, betrayal and hope.

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I would be deeply grateful if you took the time to look at the story I am working on: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1654246-ashes-of-the-dawn

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Impossible I'm craving a brutally honest critique. I would like to know what you think about this. Dark Hearts http://www.wattpad.com/story/1567095-dark-hearts

Summary: Unfortunate, vegetarian (yet amazingly beautiful) Max gets bitten by an evil vampire. The sickly venom gives her vampire abilities, so she gets whisked off to Axel Academy to learn what exactly are these new inhumanly abilities and how to use them. Her memories of the attack are erased, so she no longer knows about the existence of vampires. Adding on to that, Axel Academy isn't an ordinary school. It has one special class filled with smart, gorgeous students, named the "successors", that are like nobody Max has ever met. Struggling to discover their secrets, she's pushed to meet new people- some more frustrating than others - such as defiant delinquents, mysterious and infuriating boys, true friends, and smart-mouthed enemies. But her first year in Axel is more dangerous than it seems, at least, once she discovers the successors' true identity- and even more important: her own.

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@AngelaWu IMPOSSIBLE

http://www.wattpad.com/story/25890-alice-in-murderland

What happens when a seemingly normal girl falls down a hole?

Thank you.

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@jenny01rox First of all, since I'm doing critiques, there's really no reason for you to post a book cover. I'm not looking for reads. If you would like reads, please head on over to the SYS club instead.

@MelissaRebhahn Alright, I will try and check it out ASAP.

@TheDarkHearteds Sure thing, ASAP.

@Rayvin First of all, I noticed the title, and if it's horror I prefer not to critique that genre. I should probably have put that in the top thread.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1175197-child-of-thorns

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@AngelaWu Sorry it's because you have to click it to get the link. I changed it though.

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@AngelaWu It's not a horror story. The genre is a mixture of: fantasy and mystery with murder as a sub-plot, but it's not gory or anything.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1627306-vacant-houses

Impossible

Satire - Science Fiction - Dystopian

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@Rayvin alright, I'll check it for myself.

@MitchellMendlow hmm, alright ASAP.

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LOoking for Honest critique ps would you like to be my editor http://www.wattpad.com/5778709-twisted-inside-out

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/853975-2313-a-d

The year is 2313 A.D. and 14-year-old Avery Schultz has escaped the war-stricken United States for a new life in Germany. Everything seems safe for now, but can young Avery learn to cope with the memories she's tried so hard to forget? Or can some thing's be too traumatizing to leave behind? Meanwhile, the Prirodan Military reigns control over half the world, terrorizing gays, lesbians, other religions, and anything else that's condemned in their "Book of Love."

Thank you!

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@AngelaWu If you would be so kind... Impossible...

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1309329-simply-and-utterly-yours(rated PG-13 for language and some violent situations)

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@AngelaWu

Impossible!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/962211-little-n-large-watty-awards-2012

Nicole Crystal Welsh is starting her sophomore year at her California Performing Arts school with the best social status possible- a floater. Someone popular enough to hang with the popular crowd yet still have the ability to sit with newbies or freshmen. In a place where looks are everything Nicole is beyond satisfied with her position when the inevitable happens- girl meets boy. Floaters are usually loners but Nicole is popular enough to make it work, that's not the issue. The problem is Caleb is a whopping 5'6 and Nicole is 6'1. In a place where looks are everything Nicole must find the strength to break the cookie cutter mold or lose everything she's ever worked for with a few bumps along the way.

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Impossible! And be mean. >>

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1653378-flight

In a world full of people different from herself, Elizabet just wants to explore and go on adventures - not stay cooped up at home and get married to some rich man. When her parent's abuse becomes too much to handle and a forced marriage looms on the horizon, her only option is to escape; but before long her flight finds her lost in a strange caravan and wrapped up in a world - and fight - bigger than her. Was home really the safest place after all?

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@AFlyingMonkey Sure thing, I'll take a look ASAP.

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@AlexaFragile , once again, no book covers please! I only need the link and a short summary is welcomed. I'm not one of those SYS club people, so I don't need a cover. Thanks for understanding.

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Oh, and for those of you who failed to read my post, I won't be reading yours. I mean, basically, I'm so generous to offer a free read and a free comment, AND I'm generous enough to leave a honest critique on your book, I think I deserve at least some credit. If you don't read my post, I won't read your story.

Done.

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