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please check out my story The Devil's Sweet Snare

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1534572-the-devil%27s-sweet-snare

Phoebe is a hybrid; half werewolf and half succubus. Her demon blood being more dominant than the other made her wolf weak, thus leading her mate, who is an alpha to-be, rejecting her and making her life a living hell, just for the fun of it. But when her dormant succubus powers wake on her sixteenth birthday when she's all alone in a big house with her new drop dead gorgeous stepbrothers, what is Phoebe to do? With all the hormones her body has been releasing, her brothers' have come to believe that she was their mate and they were all practically clawing at her door trying to convince her so. ****I stopped right in front of Axel, he flashed me - what I supposed was - his infamous seductive smile and leaned into to him, taking in his intoxicating scent, a luxury I was never given because he didn't want anything to do with a hybrid. Licking my lips and giving in to my wolf's request for at least one kiss with her mate, I grabbed the collar of his shirt and stood on the tips of my toes and pressed my lips against his for a hungry and passionate kiss. Sparks exploded inside of me and I had to bite back the moan of pure ecstasy that threatened to escape my lips. Axel returned my kiss with the same intensity and deep longing. I found myself tangling my hands in his styled hair and his arms wove themselves around my waist as he pulled me closer to him. It'd felt like we'd been stuck like that for an eternity and before I had any say in it, I was wrenched from the arms of my mate and faced with a furious - about to blow - Kendra. Her arm raised and she slapped me for all I was worth. And God, did it hurt.****

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1689331-life-is-fair

A sad love story... I just started out...

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That is totally acceptable(: so anyways this is my first story, so I accept all constructive criticism. So if you ever get the chance, read, comment, and vote (optional) if you feel like my story deserves it. It's long from finished but I assure you it's a promising read.

A Bittersweet Recompense

Thriller/Romance/Action

Suzanna Roman was brought into the world an unwanted, despised child along with her brothers. She grew up an intelligent, hard-working individual until she soon encounters with Maximus Dunham. At first meeting she realizes how much abhorrence she develops from him. Despite their appalling differences, time bonds them close, and Suzanna counters a personal debate between her responsibilities, and her own affections. Little does she know about the dreadful background he holds behind him. As their bond grows stronger than she can imagine, she faces the most influential decision of her life, one that can decide the fate of the beings around her, and herself as well. Will she risk it all for a bittersweet recompense?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1665444-a-bittersweet-recompense

Thanks! Enjoy(:

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