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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Hey there! Have an epic fantasy that you want to get out there? Post here and I will (in due time) check out your awsome book! Cool, right? So here's to all you Fantasy nerds! WHOOHOO! <3 MangaPanda |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
FIRE AWAY! |
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XxFantasyGirllxX Joined: 2012-05-10 Posts: 169 |
10 months ago
@mangapanda Here is mine: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1333742-forgotten What if you woke up in an unfamiliar forest, unable to remember who you were and how you had gotten there? Follow Aryn Hemstone who, after having woken up in an unfamiliar forest without any memory, is discovered by a tradesman and his wife, who take her into their home. Travel with her as she embarks on a dangerous adventure in which she discovers a few things about her past - some of which she'd rather had remained undiscovered -, and which may cost her her life. Hope you like it!! I will go read yours now! Thanks! |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Hey there! I read a chapter of your story! Great job and be sure to check out my comment! Thanks for sharing! @Coldpl4y |
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XxFantasyGirllxX Joined: 2012-05-10 Posts: 169 |
10 months ago
@mangapanda Thanks! I left a comment on your story as well ;) nice work! |
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KronosIV Joined: 2011-06-07 Posts: 655 |
10 months ago
Summary: Azlyn and the rest of her townsfolk learns from the local truth-sayer that a Demon Hunter is coming from the wilds. Noone ever comes from the wilds and yet the truth-sayer is never wrong. Azlyn, being fascinated with becoming a swordsmen, goes and finds the Demon Hunter. Meeting him, he's obviously got a thick and long past and that's when trouble strikes home. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1619375-crow-volume-1-the-road I hope you like it, I haven't edited it at all.
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LauraRadwill Joined: 2012-05-28 Posts: 369 |
10 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1528488-hunter-of-time-watty-awards-2012 ^ There's mine! ^ It's Fantast :) I'd really appreciate you reading it! *Im off to read yours :) |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Hey there! Read a chapter of your book! Good job! Please check out my comments and I'd love if you could take a look at my book as well! Thanks for sharing! @LucifersAdvocateIIII |
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neverglade Joined: 2012-06-22 Posts: 2535 |
10 months ago
could you read mine? i could use some feed back :) heading to yours http://www.wattpad.com/story/1561575-among-the-ashes |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Read your book! Please check out my comment and thanks for sharing! @LauraRadwill |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
@neverglade WOAH MAN! Yours is 18 pages! Gimme a while so I can read it all! whooo.... |
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neverglade Joined: 2012-06-22 Posts: 2535 |
10 months ago
@mangapanda :) |
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IndigoV Joined: 2012-01-27 Posts: 871 |
10 months ago
@mangapanda if you like 18 pages i hope 64 isn't pushing it :P still would be great if you could check it out :) |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Well haha the weirdo thing about the other book is that he didn't break it up into chapters so its just 18 pages non-stop! @IndigoV |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
@IndigoV Ah, see yours is all nice and broken up. FIRST ORDER OF BUSINESS @neverglade IS TO BREAK YOUR BOOK UP A BIT! |
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IndigoV Joined: 2012-01-27 Posts: 871 |
10 months ago
@mangapanda ahh i did that when i was new to wattpad, couldn't figure out how to make chapters :P though some of mine are 6-7 pages each |
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neverglade Joined: 2012-06-22 Posts: 2535 |
10 months ago
what do you mean by brake up? @mangapanda totally confused |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
@IndigoV That still is pretty big! Though much more organized! :) |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
@neverglade You can make chapters on your story so its easier to read |
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IndigoV Joined: 2012-01-27 Posts: 871 |
10 months ago
@mangapanda i knooow and people have told me so :P but theres just too much i want to fit in each one. depending on how much any one person likes the story i consider it a good thing if it can keep them reading longer :P |
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neverglade Joined: 2012-06-22 Posts: 2535 |
10 months ago
it dose have chapters though, still confused @mangapanda |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
@IndigoV Hey I thinks it's great if you can do that! My problem is I get these good ideas but when I write them out on paper, I start rushing things! If you can chock your book full of info, thats GREAT! I and HEY my main character's name is lucas too! Funny coincedence! :P |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
@neverglade Your book has really HUGE paragraphs and really HUGE chapters that its kind of like "woah mindblow" when you try to read it! I'm saying break it up a bit and make the chapters like you did your epilogue |
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neverglade Joined: 2012-06-22 Posts: 2535 |
10 months ago
oh, un- confused thanks what did you think of the actual writing |
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mangapanda Joined: 2012-07-02 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
...I'm still reading....this thing is le huge! @neverglade |