I'LL CRITIQUE WITHIN 24HRS(HONEST & BRUTAL) TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT -I KEEP MY PROMISE

JUST READ AND COMMENT ON 2 CHAPTERS

NAME: the war of the mortal

Genre: action

DESCRIPTION: IT A STORY OF A SOLDIER

LINK:http://www.wattpad.com/story/1166614-the-war-of-the-mortals-watty-award-2012

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Hey! My story isn't on wattpad yet but I would really appreciate your critique!

You can also post a comment on there.

Link: http://anequationexplained.blogspot.com/

Thanks!

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@BelleRose you have to comply with the requirement

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@imran_theauthor hey hey hey um will you critique my story please? And I'll do what you said to too. can you critique My Two Identidies? please

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@bandgirl1444 i will dont worry please comply iwth the rules thts it

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@imran_theauthor of course! thanks you!

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anymore

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Oh, heres mine. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1591822-the-tales-of-larien-the-jewel-of-alumina How many chapters are you going to critique? If it's just one than please critique chapter 1.2 thanks. @imran_theauthor

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@Bdblazen i'll comment on all the chapters

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@bandgirl1444 done

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@Bdblazen done

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anymore i m reading constructive advice in 24 hrs

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I wouldn't mind the advice and comments. Off to yours and here's mine! http://www.wattpad.com/5268132-don%27t-try-me-watty-awards-2012-chapter-1

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anymore i'll take 20 more that it ,

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@imran_theauthor Completed Action/Romance story, also entered in the Watty Awards 2012 so all support is highly appreciated. :) Thanks. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1048665-rules-were-made-to-be-broken-watty-awards-2012

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1615689-an-angel%27s-love-and-a-vampire%27s-lust

When the war broke out between the Heavens and the Supernatural. The Vampire Prince spotted her. He could not take his eyes off of her; he didn’t even want to kill her. She was trying her best to blend in and hide. But he came face to face to her and she even thought he was the most handsome man she has ever seen. But then she felt herself being torn out of the world; she was being born for the first time onto earth right at that very moment. She then disappeared right in front of him, without a trace.

What will happen to her in the mortal world? Find out.

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anymore this is your chance

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All El is trying to do is survive. So when she can't make her rent anymore she decides to find a roommate. Follow El on her journey to find herself in a city where it's easy to lose yourself.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1646153-fml

Trust me I know about the grammar and such (I now have an editor working on it) I just want views on characters/storyline/concept.

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@vlk123 done

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@TheGreatDance done

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@imran_theauthor Going to urs, here's mine.

Children's book/ Humor: http://www.wattpad.com/4938489-fate-is-unpredictable-chapter-one-the-big-idea

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@Struggler not now my dear sorry i have ot finish the stories pending first u know.

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@imran_theauthor Oh okay. Sorry! :/

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