hardcore critique, im here alot of the time
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bloodylies2012
Joined: 2012-06-06Posts: 810 months agoi will ctitque your story the only thing i ask for in return is critique my very short story with 4 pages. here is the link. http://www.wattpad.com/5021746-bloody-lies-chapter-1
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thirtythirty30
Joined: 2012-06-15Posts: 910 months agoI'll comment/critique on yours :)
Could you critique/comment on mine? Would be appreciated, thank you :)
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bloodylies2012Joined: 2012-06-06Posts: 810 months ago
okey no problem :) @thirtythirty30
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mistressfantasy
Joined: 2012-06-29Posts: 7410 months agoI'll go read your story right away and leave a comment:) Here is mine: Any feedback, good or bad, would be wonderful! Thanks!
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Make your own banner at MyBannerMaker.com!Alecia is not human. She just isn't. Believe it or not, her mother is a mythical creature called a Seiren (some may spell it, Siren). Some may say that being only half human is a gift, a dream come true, but not Alecia. To her, it is a curse. Because of her mother being what she is, she will never be allowed to sing a single note without forcing the men around her to fall hopelessly in love with her. But that is not love: only forced devotion. Now, her father, Rick, is missing and Alecia fears the worst. Throughout this novel, Alecia will have to embark on a parlous adventure with her closest friend, Diaman, in an attempt to save her beloved father from the thing that gave birth to her...
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tachion
Joined: 2012-06-23Posts: 38610 months ago@bloodylies2012 Will check yours. Would be glad if you did take a look at my short story/ humour story. Would be glad. And plus its just a page. Link= http://bit.ly/TheHeartAttack123
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bloodylies2012Joined: 2012-06-06Posts: 810 months ago
@mistressfantasy @alok94 okey guys no problem, ill read it right now :)
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SherryGb
Joined: 2011-12-01Posts: 4210 months agoI just read your story and am about to give feedback and I'll vote. :) Please critique mine? It would be greatly appreciated as I am just writing the story because I keep getting reads, but zilch of critique lol. Don't be afraid to have a go at me, I will take it and keep it in mind!
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bloodylies2012Joined: 2012-06-06Posts: 810 months ago
i finished everyones except @PurpleBoomBoxx @SherryGb but i will take care of it now :)
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