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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
All I ask is that you check out mine too. It's not long and I would really like some comments or critiques. :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1579864-reflect-my-world Post the link to your poem, or title, down below. I'll get to it as soon as I can. I'll read your poem once you've read mine. Thanks a lot x |
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AlexIsHere Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 1925 |
10 months ago
@JenniHeart I read yours so can you please read mine? :) http://www.wattpad.com/5296505-barbie http://www.wattpad.com/5320464-dear-parents |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
@AlexIsHere I read your poems and commented on the 3 I really loved. You're an amazing writer! You have some fantastic poems. Thanks for reading my poem.x |
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AlexIsHere Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 1925 |
10 months ago
@JenniHeart Thank you so much! Your comments really made me happy! :D |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
@AlexIsHere No problem. I love making people happy X) |
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AlmanajaBlackwater Joined: 2012-02-08 Posts: 106 |
10 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/4647739-psychasthenia-a-life-black-nights please read all of them. feel free to comment. thank you |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
@AlmanajaBlackwater Okay dokey. Be sure to check out my poem ;) |
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LaPetiteMorte18 Joined: 2011-05-26 Posts: 3105 |
10 months ago
Hi, can you check out my poem please? http://www.wattpad.com/5412889-my-darkness-on-paper-i%27m-damned-i%27m-the-abused?d=ud |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
@InnocentKitten Sure, be sure to swing by mine too :) |
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cocotrebleclef Joined: 2011-05-27 Posts: 138 |
10 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/5341727-realism-in-fantasy commented on yours, nice work :) |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
@cocotrebleclef Thanks a bunch! Off to yours now. |
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Rach18 Joined: 2012-01-18 Posts: 175 |
10 months ago
Hey! I'm new to wattpad. Well new to posting poetry. I just started yesterday.I was wondering if you could read some of them and critique me, because this is the first time I have ever let anyone see my poetry and I really don't know how it is. If any of you could, could you please just look at it pretty please? Here are a few http://www.wattpad.com/5402198-history |
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JennithorOfAsgard Joined: 2010-07-12 Posts: 39 |
10 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1548149-a-compilation-of-poetry-spiritual I have two relatively short poems in this story. :) And, I'll go check yours out, thanks. :) |
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Shehnaz1234 Joined: 2012-06-24 Posts: 232 |
10 months ago
I'm going to check urs out, here's mine! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1578390-acid-attack |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
@Rach18 Sure, I'd love to give them a try. Be sure to check out mine to: |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
Thanks for reading my poem. Sorry I got to it so late. I've been super busy! |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
Thanks. I'm going to yours right now. Sorry for the delay ;) |
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Shehnaz1234 Joined: 2012-06-24 Posts: 232 |
10 months ago
no problemo |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
Still open if anyone is interested ;) |
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Shehnaz1234 Joined: 2012-06-24 Posts: 232 |
10 months ago
hey i have another, want to read? http://www.wattpad.com/5419390-acid-attack-i-will-always-win |
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JenniHeart Joined: 2012-06-06 Posts: 56 |
10 months ago
Sure do x |
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AustinWriter Joined: 2012-06-26 Posts: 117 |
10 months ago
I checked yours :) Very well written with the reflection, and those last lines were well meant and dark, wow :) http://www.wattpad.com/5421953-my-dear-angel Its a small attempt... :) |
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Forgetful_Me Joined: 2011-06-30 Posts: 2191 |
10 months ago
Commented and voted! You poem was amazing! Here's mine, thanks! @JenniHeart http://www.wattpad.com/5423768-the-girl-with-perfection-imperfection?d=ud |
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Rach18 Joined: 2012-01-18 Posts: 175 |
10 months ago
I know you have already read mine but this one is brand new and pretty please read it. :-) |
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_RubyRedRoses Joined: 2012-04-16 Posts: 55 |
10 months ago
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