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_crazywriter777
Joined: 2012-06-26Posts: 1010 months agoPost the story here, on my wall or in a message and as soon as I can, I will read it. I love to read so post um up:)
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BrokenBloodyHearts
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_crazywriter777Joined: 2012-06-26Posts: 1010 months ago
@crazyismeinblack It could be good but it needs a lot of work:) I am willing to help you but through messages if you want. Let me know here if you do or don't. Either way, good luck writing:)
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BrokenBloodyHeartsJoined: 2011-08-01Posts: 12210 months ago
@crazywriter777 I'd love some help thanks
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Sorria_Rothens
Joined: 2012-06-24Posts: 14610 months agoHeres the summary: Abrial's life seems to be on a downward spiral. Her mother's health is declining yet she still continues to turn to alcohol; Abrial's home is under foreclose and the majority their assets have been seized by the bank, penniless and with no where to turn they decide to contact Abrial's estranges Aunt Helena. Helena proprosses that Abrial and her mother move into her estate in a small northern surf town. There she meets Ash, a big wave surfer with an even bigger heart and Misty, the fisherman's daughter. But will Abrial be able to let go of her fears and fall in love? find out in this compelling romantic comedy. and the link: http://www.wattpad.com/5414474-blunder
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PutSomethingIn
Joined: 2012-03-12Posts: 3510 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1336584-they-say-that-in-the-army heres my book thank you :)
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_crazywriter777Joined: 2012-06-26Posts: 1010 months ago
@Sorria_Rothens It's really good and I love the way you describe things. Nice work and I am a fan:)
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SmoresLover
Joined: 2012-02-08Posts: 43010 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1494834-finding-my-song could you read mine please? id love it thanx ;)
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_crazywriter777Joined: 2012-06-26Posts: 1010 months ago
@PutSomethingIn I read the first chapters and I have to say it is beautiful! Really sad but I think you have a great plot here and it's new and fresh. I will keep reading because I love it:)
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_crazywriter777Joined: 2012-06-26Posts: 1010 months ago
@SmoresLover I sent you a message with my advice! I hope I helped you:)
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K33phoebe1
Joined: 2011-12-20Posts: 2110 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/819203-moving-and-its-consequences could you read mine and honestly tell me what you think i would really appreciated and if you know of an editor that could help me with my story could you plz tell me i would really appreciated
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_Bdblazen
Joined: 2012-06-28Posts: 22310 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/5442148-the-jewel-of-alumina
Hey guys! This is a modern fantasy that I am making and I would appreciate it if you guys comment and help me make this better, please be honest. Thanks!
Description: In the kingdom of Larien, the beloved queen dies of a fatal illness. The king is told that the healer's spells wont have any effect on the queen, but he is soon told of a sacred Jewel that has unfortold powers of healing, including bringing those who died back to life. The king, determined to save his wife, sends forth an order saying "Whoever is able to bring the sacred jewel to me will be rewarded 10,000,000 grad!" (the story's currency) Filled with excitement, adventurers from near and far, including Austin Ernest, the main protagonist, travel to the kingdom to try to obtain that reward
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PricklyLittlePandas
Joined: 2012-06-20Posts: 30610 months ago@crazywriter777 I need help making my story better so any critique would be a great help. My story is called 'Ghostly'
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BrokenBloodyHeartsJoined: 2011-08-01Posts: 1229 months ago
@crazywriter777 I posted the next part
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