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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
11 months ago
Okay so here's the deal. I'm planning to write a story/novel about 4 different people at high school. So I want three other co-writers. Each of you will get to make your own character and write for them. So when we write it will go in the same order every time. I will chose my co-writers on their characters they make, and their examples. Below are the forums. Character Forums. (I'm using my character forum for example) Name (first and last): Danielle Chase Nickname: Dani Gender: Female Age/grade: 17, 11th/ Junior Personality: Danielle is what a normalish girl. She has a ton of friends. Knows almost everyone in the school. Always has her phone. She gets good grades, loves to read and write, plus she sings and acts a little. She plays sports. All sports. She may be a little shy but when she's on stage for a play, or in the middle of a game or track meet she goes all out. Appearance: Curly Brown hair, Hazel eyes, skinny, and around 5'5". Hobbies: Reading, writing, Sings,acting and sports Romance (Do you want them to be with someone): Yes Once everyone is picked we will go through all of this information in decide if any of them are friends, how they all connect and etc. Co-writer forum: How long you've been writing: How much are you on wattpad: Post a story of yours: |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
11 months ago
Can I help? :) Name : Jason McCartney Gender : Male Age : 17, 11th (wish you would write about high school, it would be so much more fun! :) ) Personality : He's got the looks and brains. He's a pretty popular person, and instead of being mean like most of his football friends are, he's nice and polite to everyone. He's atheletic and good at all sports. He even dances and sings a little. Appearance : caramel tousled hair, Green eyes, atheletic, 6'0" hobbies : Sports, dance, hanging out with friends, Reading (secretly) romance : Yes, secretly he's a big romantic at heart and damn sweet Is that good? :) Well I've actually been writing for many years. But I've just joined wattpad :) |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
11 months ago
Ok I'll change it to High school and yes it's amazing @AngelShaina |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
11 months ago
Perfect! Im that case Jason can be 17 and in junior year (11th) :) What about Danielle? @Things_always_change |
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MyshEngalx Joined: 2012-06-21 Posts: 15 |
11 months ago
Avelynne's my baby, and I'd appreciate if you didn't use her, who ever who's still intersted. And Ryan too. |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
11 months ago
I know this isnt my story.....but her description is so cool! except it'd be better if she was 15 or 16, right? :) @MyshEngalx |
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brokenMe98 Joined: 2012-02-29 Posts: 80 |
11 months ago
So, I'm notthat new on wattpad but yet I've never finished a story on here; maybe because I don't have anyone to push me to write further. Anyway, I'd really love to help you with your story: Name (first and last): Raya Williams Nickname: Ray Gender: Female Age/grade: 17, 11th/ Junior Personality: Raya is a sweet girl not so popular in her school but well known with her random yet wise personality, she is the best friend ever but when it comes to love she becomes cold and icy because she was already hurt by someone. Appearance: straight black hair with ocean blue eyes with height around 160 cm". Hobbies: Fooling around (dk if this is a hobbie) dancing amd a little bit of rapping Romance (Do you want them to be with someone): No, the reason is because she was hear broken and hurt. :) |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
11 months ago
She's the same @AngelShaina Wonder these are great you guys @brokenMe98 @MyshEngalx |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
11 months ago
@brokenMe98 @AngelShaina @MyshEngalx Okay so If no one else comments on this then it will be us four |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
11 months ago
@brokenMe98 @AngelShaina @MyshEngalx Okay so It's us four all writing together First thing we need is to think of the how all the characters Connect P.S. Please post a link to a picture of your character so we all know what extactly they look like Mine's below |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
10 months ago
Perfect! Ok, honestly when I wrote Jason's character i had this in my mind : But if u want I can change it :) |
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MyshEngalx Joined: 2012-06-21 Posts: 15 |
10 months ago
Once again, please DON'T USE LYNNE AND RYAN |
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brokenMe98 Joined: 2012-02-29 Posts: 80 |
10 months ago
@Things_always_change Okay, here is the girl I was thinking about is Carley Rae Jepsen and here is a pic for it http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRArFBB2_RIgt7taSqufwfzl-mhaifkxBePUDVaHuB73yEMKYcYaQ I also thinking hard about the connection between them, the thing is what genre do you want this story to be coz if it is a teen-fic then I think they will be all in the same school living drama and blah blah blah, but if it is kinda mystery-suspense thing then we can make a connection between them in some sort of murder or a connected past, another intresting idea is if you want making a horror story then we have to put them all with some other group of people in a one (creepy) place and they'll be getting murdered one by one until someone will discover the killer but unfortunatly it'll be too late and the murdurer will kill whoever has known him........I know it's not so clear at the last one, yet I kinda want this to be a horror story but eventually it's up to you. Hope I helped :) |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Well Since we all are co-writers I thought it'd be better to all chose what kind of genre @brokenMe98 |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
10 months ago
@Things_always_change Ohk, I had an idea bout the connection between them thing. Instead of the typical romance stuff we can put the genre as a thriller + romance +mystery + adventure. I really really liked @brokenMe98 's idea a lot. Except that murder till the last one is kind of like a typical horror movie script. What we can do instead that after spending some time in high school (first few chapters) where each characters talk about their time right now and the typical high school problems, we can show in later on chapters that there is a school trip or something going for ages 14-18, and these characters are there, during the storyline we can add the mystery and all. As far as romance part of Jason's character is concerned, He's completely misunderstood as a player, but he's a true gentleman at heart. So you guys tell me whom do u want him to be with so i make his character notice that person and all.... Also, there should be some negative points all the characters should have, right? so should we discuss that? |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
10 months ago
@MyshEngalx Haha I totally understand :) new freshmen and insecure :) |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Yea I like that @AngelShaina How about you guys do you guys like it? @brokenMe98 @MyshEngalx |
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brokenMe98 Joined: 2012-02-29 Posts: 80 |
10 months ago
@Things_always_change @AngelShaina I like the point where w should put some negative points at all the characters coz you know (Nobody's perfect). I know that the story line for the horror version is typical but it's only a basic line and we can make huge twists on it, we'll figure them out later. And yes, let's make the trip go to camping and teachres and students will be seperated then along with the story development there will be challenges that the killer puts to test this group of students and those challenges will be mental more than they are physical; we will develope this later because right now we're not so sure if the story will be like a thriller thing or more like a romance. |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Why don't we make it both a thriller and a romance. The killer has to have a reason for the killing. Or thye should anyways. So could they think this is the only way to be with someone they like. And add jason's and whomevers romance as well? @AngelShaina @brokenMe98 |
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brokenMe98 Joined: 2012-02-29 Posts: 80 |
10 months ago
@Things_always_change I agree on it being both a romance and a thriller but now we need to find the reason why the killer is killing them? With the exeption that the killer could be a complete psycho haha, and we should also put another less important characters in this. |
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_Things_always_change Joined: 2012-05-27 Posts: 188 |
10 months ago
Yea do we want the killer to be a student on the trip or like a teacher or parent that went or just some random person @brokenMe98 |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
10 months ago
@brokenMe98 @Things_always_change @MyshEngalx awesome! Ohk, how about the killer is one of the students itself taking revenge? or a teacher who was expelled for relating to something with a student who loses everything in process but the teacher did nothing wrong?? And as far as jason and whoever's romance is concerned, you guys tell me who should i put it up with :) Oh and less important characters : Melanie - Jason's current gf who is a cheerleder, but he doesnt really like her and is about to break up with her, Mark - Jason's best friend, Mr.Jonathon - English teacher, Mrs. Wright - School Nurse, Mrs.Cabot - Event organizer of school and she can go with this trip and all. Devon - One of Jason's friends whom (one of the main girls) have a crush on (ohk, this is to add the excitement factor) and.....any suggestions? I think we should start writing up a few points for our characters (like im gonna mention below and make sure no two personalities are similar or it kinda ruins the whole plot of the story. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Family history of jason : His father was a military officer, he always taught Jason to be a true gentleman and keep his respect for women and his surroundings his first priority. His father also taught him to value his education the most and most of the moral values a person should know. His mother was more of a show-off person. He was pretty rich so he lived in a huge mansion. His mother put him in many classes and events since he was young, so Jason's pretty multi-talented and versatile, though most of his friends at school dont know this about him. His actual passion is Astronomy since he's always been fascinated by the stars and all but NO ones knows about that....(ctd) |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
10 months ago
----His second passion is reading books and writing stories, poems and songs (he knows how to play guitar but thats a secret too) But no one knows about that too except his English teacher. He's a member of one of the social work organizations for hunger relief and yet again, no one knows about that as he tries to keep this side of him a secret. There are many more secrets he has, but he's really good at hiding them. Anyways, he still awaits for his father and sends him letters about himself every week and receives one in return. He used to have a little sister named Emma, she used to be an 8th grader, but she was physically abused and used as a threat to Jason's father by some criminal rebels and Emma was recovered but she died from the shock. That's why Jason's pretty protective over the women he really cares about including his grandmother, mother and (whoever the girl u guys are gonna pair him up with-though he's gonna be protective of her later). His third passion is sports. He feels free when he's running or is involved in sports. Its like his mind goes into an Auto-play mode..... |
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AngelShaina Joined: 2012-06-20 Posts: 110 |
10 months ago
----He's the quarterback of his team, and has great friends, but he doesnt really trust them all. He's good in studies, really good, but he pretends he's more interested in Sports. He makes sure he isn't really rude with someone and is invited to all the popular kids parties. He's one of the people who doesnt drink at those parties and is still pretty popular. He's usually with the girls not because of some sort of bad boy attitude but because girls usually want him and flirt with him and to be polite he doesnt really say no. He's misunderstood as a player but in reality he tries to find that one girl who likes him for the way he is in every girl he's ever dated instead of his money and the title of being "Jason McCartney's Girlfriend." ...... I know most of him sounds unrealistic, but I'm actually kinda describing my boyfriend here :) Except for the having a little sister part, its all my boyfriend :) |
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brokenMe98 Joined: 2012-02-29 Posts: 80 |
10 months ago
@AngelShaina @Things_always_change Yes, I loved the background for Jason and I think he should be in fallin for Dani because they have so much in common along with the sports, reading, writing and all that. The background for my character will be more like this------------Ray is the most sweet girl you could ever meet until her heart was broken by some player who she thought was her true love, ever since then she never trusted any man. The problems between her parents and the way her father was abusing her mother made her trust issues with boys grow even more, now she lives in a house with her mother and her younger brother who is still two years old, her mother works in a bank and not at home mostly so Ray had to take care of herself and her brother while her mom wasn't around. Ray knows that her mom wants her to graduate from college and become eithe r a lawer or a doctor, that's why Ray studies very hard in school in order to please her mother but Ray herself has another scet passion which is singing or more likely rapping, but she keeps this dream for herself for now.-------- There also will be Aren, who is Ray's best friend and Zach who is her best friend too. I think we need to make more male characters in this story that's why I put Zach and there will also be the gym teacher Mr.Rond. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The main thing that we should think about now is who is gonna be the killer and WHY? |