Help please!

Okay so I have a name for my story,"Those Three Little Words," and I have the description of the stpry but I don't know how to start the prologue...I know I want the girls name to be Layla Parker and the mother telling them that they are moving to Florida because they will currently be living in California. I know What the plot is but I just don't know how to start! Any suggestions or ideas or anthing? I will dedicate you if you reallyyyy help me! And even fan!

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Description-

We are moving- those are the three little words that changed my life forever. When you think of three words you probably think of "I love you" or "I miss you". but this, sadly, is not the case in this situation.

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Or anything I can add to the description to make it longer or better?

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What's the point of view?

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i think that is really good so far but add about the problem too so people will get interested. is the whole story about her moving?

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prologues are not necessary to make a good story, just skip to the part you're excited to write about and work backwards until you have the first chapter starting at the beginning of the plot! :)

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Hmm.. Have you considered the point of view of a family pet? Perhaps a cat that is a silent witness discussing things with other animals? If so, maybe a bird could be included? In that way, it could be present the day of the move, fly away and return later in the story to recount what has changed.

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@BrokenTypewriter Layla

@GreenstoneRie Thank you and it's about her moving and then having to go to a new school and make friends and stuff and you know fall in love with the guy there.

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@adrienne0047 Thank you for the advice! @jlstroudjr and I don't think I would beAble to do an animals point of view on it...

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@haha2721 i'll send you an example in a private message(:

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