Honest opinions on your poetry

Heres mine....:) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1544585-love-inherited wud really appreciate some feedback!!

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@Mystified-Soul REALLY GOOD!!! You need to put little punctuation. OTHER WISE IT'S FANTASITICEEEE!!! Keep on writing

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Help me with mine:)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1340126-loneliness

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1325948-the-wild-beast-in-human

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@Mystified-Soul REALLY GOOD just use more punctuation and YOUR ALL SET IT WAS AWSOMEEEE

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@Forgetful_Me It's really cuteeeee!!!! I LOVE HOW IT'S SO TRUE!! KWLEEP ON WRITING!!

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@Dizzzy ITS TO TRUE!!!! It's so good you did everything good!!! I love it's :D KEEP ON WRITING!!!

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@AimeDimps It's so Cuteeeee I saw NO mistakes!!!!

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http://www.wattpad.com/5305610-a-demon%27s-destructive-love ^-^ This is the second poem i've written so far! ^-^ enjoy!

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Please read my selection of poems, if you like them please vote and tell you friends to vote. This book is not yet finished but I have a feeling if I get my reads I'll be inspired to write more(: thank you to everyone who does read&vote(:

http://www.wattpad.com/story/475401-this-ones-for-you

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@winniewowinn wow YOUR GOOD!!! you used all the ounctuation right!!! the lonliness one was awsome!! and the wild beast in a human was scary!!! keep on writing !!!

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@angeliclildemon MUCH BETTER!!!! WOW YOUR GOOD!! I found no mistakes YOUE GOOD !!! KEEP ON WRITING this scared me............. but still good!!

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@Emilee_Castronovo REALLY GOOD LOVE IT!!!! I promise i'll tell my fans to fan you and to read your poetry :) YOU HAVE A GIFT use it wisley !!!! just one thing...... use punctuation correctlty like capitalize some letters ect. otherwise YOUR AWSOME I ACTUALLY CRIED UPLOAD!!!!!

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Hey I'd love your opinion on these poems, please! @funsized21 http://www.wattpad.com/story/783902-the-everlasting-battle http://www.wattpad.com/story/1058705-my-angel-of-dark

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http://www.wattpad.com/5291395-an-angel%27s-wings :)

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@funsized21 Thankyou for all that you have said I truly appreciate it(: I will take your advice and use it t the best of my ability to improve my future pieces. Ps thanks for the fan and the shoutout(:

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http://www.wattpad.com/2656768-like-hitting-a-pillow-only-better-001

THANK YOU MY DEARYY!! : )

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Ok, I'll bite. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1574008-very-much-longer

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haha...well..i really appreciate that!! =) @funsized21

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@funsized21 hey hope you like my poem. happy reading :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1447319-child-of-nature

http://www.wattpad.com/4958576-midnight-drive

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http://www.wattpad.com/5196470-oreo a small poem using oreos as figurative language http://www.wattpad.com/4606177-the-thyme-collection a collection of poetry categorized into different subjects

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@funsized21 http://www.wattpad.com/4989423-just-an-ode

http://www.wattpad.com/5390068-little-voices

..please check out mine,,;)

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@KatherineK WOW JUST WOW !!! YOur amazing!!!! why are asking for my help when your already great?? KEEP ON WRITING

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@KelloggstheMonster REALLY GOOD !!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!

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@burrahndee SOO TRUE !!! I LOVE IT!!! found no mistakes!!! keep on writing!!

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Thank you :) Well a second opinion and a bit of promotion is always great! Since you are into poetry I wanted to see what do you think :) @funsized21

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