I'll give feedback on your poetry, and share some of mine? Post away!

Go ahead. Don't be shy.

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http://www.wattpad.com/5079625-defused

Hope you like it I just wrote it, any feedback would be appreciated. I will check your out now!!

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http://www.wattpad.com/4411273-foolish-heart :)

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click on me and go to BOX AND KEY:)

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http://www.wattpad.com/4903749-bits-and-pieces

This is actually my collection of poems and lyrics that I have written. Feel free to read which ever ones you find appealing. Some feedback or opinions would be greatly appreciated! Thanx

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http://www.wattpad.com/5000392-my-poetry-an-incompetent-eulogy heres mine, ill go to yours now <3 thanks a lot!

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@Nerdechoz, I really liked that poem, it was very ethereal. I liked the bit about the room breeding silence, thought that was good imagery.

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AndreaPorcelaindoll, I thought foolish heart was really relatable, and I liked the rhyme scheme

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4alimitedtime, your poetry is outstanding. I loved the act of reading and understanding it, because it's pretty great.

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Glassangel, where are all of your reads? Top-notch stuff, my favourite being perhaps "The Door", or "Will you give me the strength to stay"

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inkedontomyheart, I felt like that poem was made to be understood by everyone differently. You have a great writing style.

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http://www.wattpad.com/4580368-voiceless-talk-a-fissure-in-the-face-of-revolution

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@NatalieACircusFreak http://www.wattpad.com/story/1506315-the-taming-of-the-cougar

This is my first poem "The Taming of the Cougar". It's a bit of a narrative poem, and I'm iffy about it, but I'm proud of it anyway. I hope you enjoy it. I voted for the link you posted - I love the imagery of your poem!

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@merenova, I like the narrative style you used, it was very creative. Don't feel iffy about it, it read quite well.

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http://www.wattpad.com/5162997-torrent-of-inspiration-faded-drops That is one of my first poems, so I doubt it would be any good, but I'd appreciate if you read that and the subsequent ones as well. (http://www.wattpad.com/5164270-torrent-of-inspiration-dry-times http://www.wattpad.com/5164434-torrent-of-inspiration- ) Thanks.

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http://www.wattpad.com/5128312-the-bird-in-the-dark

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1411865-why-'hate'

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1289247-everyone-likes-her-but-no-one-likes-her

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1030549-four

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1488513-were-cool

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1477309-imperfection-look-in-the-mirror

http://www.wattpad.com/4792633-overcoming-the-instinct

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1095933-it%27s-okay-to-be-gay

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1163963-she-cuts-wattyaward2012

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1373407-dance-in-the-dark

I hope you enjoy <3

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http://www.wattpad.com/5118690-you%27re-never-there-song

Hi! so.. this is the first poem I´ve uploaded ever (it´s a song, actually :P) and... I don´t know what to think about it :/ so, please give me some feedback?? That'd be much appreciated :D

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@NatalieACircusFreak http://www.wattpad.com/5183736-the-art-of-confusion-joey-dedhart

i'll check out urs :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1499214-random-limericks

I'm looking forward to reading yours!

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@NatalieACircusFreak Well you've offered so here's mine. Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/897241-%E2%99%A5romantic-poetry-collection%E2%99%A5%C2%A9-its-love-in-poetic%27s

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