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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
Go ahead. Don't be shy. |
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Lessthantruthful Joined: 2012-04-06 Posts: 548 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/5079625-defused Hope you like it I just wrote it, any feedback would be appreciated. I will check your out now!! |
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ItsCalledMurder_Babe Joined: 2011-07-08 Posts: 1474 |
11 months ago
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4alimitedtime Joined: 2012-04-02 Posts: 183 |
11 months ago
click on me and go to BOX AND KEY:) |
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Glassangel Joined: 2012-04-26 Posts: 120 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/4903749-bits-and-pieces This is actually my collection of poems and lyrics that I have written. Feel free to read which ever ones you find appealing. Some feedback or opinions would be greatly appreciated! Thanx |
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_inkedontomyheart Joined: 2012-04-17 Posts: 243 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/5000392-my-poetry-an-incompetent-eulogy heres mine, ill go to yours now <3 thanks a lot! |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
@Nerdechoz, I really liked that poem, it was very ethereal. I liked the bit about the room breeding silence, thought that was good imagery. |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
AndreaPorcelaindoll, I thought foolish heart was really relatable, and I liked the rhyme scheme |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
4alimitedtime, your poetry is outstanding. I loved the act of reading and understanding it, because it's pretty great. |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
Glassangel, where are all of your reads? Top-notch stuff, my favourite being perhaps "The Door", or "Will you give me the strength to stay" |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
inkedontomyheart, I felt like that poem was made to be understood by everyone differently. You have a great writing style. |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
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merenova Joined: 2012-05-06 Posts: 803 |
11 months ago
@NatalieACircusFreak http://www.wattpad.com/story/1506315-the-taming-of-the-cougar This is my first poem "The Taming of the Cougar". It's a bit of a narrative poem, and I'm iffy about it, but I'm proud of it anyway. I hope you enjoy it. I voted for the link you posted - I love the imagery of your poem! |
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NatalieACircusFreak Joined: 2012-01-28 Posts: 9 |
11 months ago
@merenova, I like the narrative style you used, it was very creative. Don't feel iffy about it, it read quite well. |
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FreakAccident Joined: 2012-06-14 Posts: 236 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/5162997-torrent-of-inspiration-faded-drops That is one of my first poems, so I doubt it would be any good, but I'd appreciate if you read that and the subsequent ones as well. (http://www.wattpad.com/5164270-torrent-of-inspiration-dry-times http://www.wattpad.com/5164434-torrent-of-inspiration- ) Thanks. |
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NaivebutComplicated Joined: 2011-12-25 Posts: 1020 |
11 months ago
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Blowurspeakers Joined: 2012-03-05 Posts: 255 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/5118690-you%27re-never-there-song Hi! so.. this is the first poem I´ve uploaded ever (it´s a song, actually :P) and... I don´t know what to think about it :/ so, please give me some feedback?? That'd be much appreciated :D |
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smokedroses Joined: 2012-06-08 Posts: 141 |
11 months ago
@NatalieACircusFreak http://www.wattpad.com/5183736-the-art-of-confusion-joey-dedhart i'll check out urs :) |
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TheAbsenceOfNothing Joined: 2012-02-21 Posts: 132 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1499214-random-limericks I'm looking forward to reading yours! |
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nicollettenikki Joined: 2009-08-12 Posts: 758 |
11 months ago
@NatalieACircusFreak Well you've offered so here's mine.
Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/897241-%E2%99%A5romantic-poetry-collection%E2%99%A5%C2%A9-its-love-in-poetic%27s
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