WANT SOMEONE TO READ AND CRITIQUE YOUR STORY? I WILL!

@BlayBither it would help if you became my fan and read my story! http://www.wattpad.com/4977554-jumping-off-a-cliff

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Really need honest critiquing :D PLEASE BE THE ONE :D lol, hope you enjoy mine though :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1383884-my-daughter-audrey-watty-awards-2012

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Beautiful description! I suggest longer paragraphs and more details. Other than that, IT's GREAT Good Luck And Nice Job! @EKShortstories

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@FancyOtter can you put a link?

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@Starsareshining hey it would really help if you would become a fan, comment, read my story, and voted. Thanks! http://www.wattpad.com/4977554-jumping-off-a-cliff

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IT WOULD REALLY HELP IF THE PEOPLE WHO I READ THEIR STORIES AND STUFF WOULD READ MINE http://www.wattpad.com/4977554-jumping-off-a-cliff COMMENT AND VOTE AND FAN ME! :D Thanks! I love all you guys! :D

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Imagination

Avery Justice is your normal quiet girl in school, but at home her mother’s an alcoholic and her farther left her before she was able to walk. She only has one person she actually talks to, the old lady two blocks away. When Avery was just a little girl, she taught her that whatever you want, whenever you want it - you can get it, you just have to close your eyes. And that's what she does. She lives in her own bubble of a world, until someone comes along and wants to be a part of it.

http://www.wattpad.com/4450617-imagination-chapter-1-%7E-welcome-to-my-life

Genre: Teen Fiction / Romance

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@DramaGirly123 http://www.wattpad.com/story/954882-lost-to-lovely hmm iwas sure if you clicked on the picture it would take you there. But okay c:

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@DramaGirly123 It would be awesome if you could read this... IF you can, will you please check out my last chapter too because I need to know how that one is? Thanks in advance

Bees Forgetting To Fly - http://www.wattpad.com/story/1279809-bees-forgetting-to-fly-~editing~

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http://www.wattpad.com/4977554-jumping-off-a-cliff @SophieKrarup

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@FancyOtter oh sorry.

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@SophieKrarup I suggest longer paragraphs and great cover! More detail,! Great cover! Cute! Good Luck and nice Job!

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Sad! I suggest longer paragraphs and more detail! Great emotion! Good Luck! @TeaAddict97

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OK I GOTTA LOG OFF! BYE~

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Sure :) the links here http://www.wattpad.com/story/1429860-mates-with-a-highschool-wolf @DramaGirly123

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@DramaGirly123

The Angel I'm Not

Description:

Destiny: the predetermined, usually inevitable or irresistible, course of events. Destiny, the thing that was meant to happen. Destiny, the girl that was chosen. Seventeen year old Destiny Grey gets into a horrible accident, that should have cost her life, and yet she’s still alive. Recovering faster than anyone thought imaginable, Destiny is truly blessed. After her accident over six months ago, Destiny has made a full recovery. She’s back in school and everything is normal. That is, until Mark and Lucas arrive at school. Mark is tall, handsome, and has one heck of a smile. Lucas on the other hand is tall, brooding, with a slow smirk that sends shivers up Destiny’s spine. Both these boys are mysterious and even though they both showed up in Destiny’s life at the same time, neither of the boys seem to want anything to do with each other. There’s secrets being kept, lies being told, and lives that will never be the same.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1334291-the-angel-i%27m-not

Thank you for taking your time to do this. Just letting you know, people have told me that she seems too young so I'm working on that. Thanks so much! <3

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@DramaGirly123 Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/4829009-midnight-miracle

Mine is only 4 pages long so it won't take you a long time to read it, and I really think it's worth it! I really appreciate every read that I get.

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Can you critique my story? I need advice really bad >.<

http://www.wattpad.com/4849641-let-them-eat-cake

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http://www.wattpad.com/4958101-the-true-price-of-silence if you ever get around to reading them all , please check this story out :)

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Hi! I am new here and looking for fantasy readers! :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1265680-the-steel-queen-prologue

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Victoria's life was hell. Her parents didn't care about her, she only had two friends. They were outcasts. She hated her life. She was an 'Emo' and 'Cutter' Then Erik comes along. Erik was your typical bad-ass. Always in trouble, fearless, short-tempered. he hated the world for taking the only person who ever gave a flip about him away. Then this girl, waltz's in his life and everything changes. But will they get their happy ever after? Who knows. Fate plays a wicked game. Sometimes love doesn't always prevail. Read to find if Happily Ever comes true....... http://www.wattpad.com/story/1426842-kill-me-slowly @DramaGirly123

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Invisible? http://www.wattpad.com/story/1444758-invisible No memory, nearly blind, deaf, and confused. Through all this, I still manage to return home. But when I do, I learn a terrible "accident" has happened. Too bad for me, I am the person that was involved in the accident.(I am aware that the description isn't the best... It's only the first chapter too but what do you think about it so far?)

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@KimberlyBarrow great job i love it! :D I really dont see too much problems~! :D

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