I will critique your story :)
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Xrosesnevercry
Joined: 2011-07-01Posts: 36611 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/story/1331903-better-half-of-me
Meet Lydia, she's fierce and emotionally closeted. According to her, people are never meant to be together forever, so why bother falling in love? Sometimes, it's as love has a mind of its own, working in its mysterious ways. Everything we face in life is a challenge, so will Lydia be able to accept it when love decides to head her way, and open herself up again? Will it all be worth it in the end?
Thank you! :)
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MrWolfman29
Joined: 2012-05-29Posts: 1111 months agoHey, I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on my new series! :) Please let me know what you think! :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1432482-resurrection
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FancyOtter
Joined: 2012-02-02Posts: 29111 months agoTitle: Lost to Lovely
[Completed]
http://www.wattpad.com/story/954882-lost-to-lovely
Summary: [Trigger warning: mild boyxboy] Two boys. Different problems. One solution. Run. Theo Jennings in just another lowly hybrid. After months of abuse and torment from his previous owner he's found himself back at the pound. When a sleazy bum opts to adopt him, Theo hasn't the slightest clue his life is about to make a turn for the worse. Jacques Monroe is a pampered rich kid. His father is strict and abusive. When one day his father does something that will make Jacques never look at him the same way again, Jacques makes a snap decision. With a slip of fate and a risky decision, the two boys meet. Their friendship is grand, maybe even a little bit more. But with ghosts of their past on their tail and the cruel eyes of society judging their every move, the boy's relationship is threatened. Will their relationship survive? Or better yet, will they?
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Anneriz
Joined: 2012-02-17Posts: 14011 months agohttp://www.wattpad.com/4297085-poetry-of-bea-balmes/comment/12883695
^ That is a poem.. I really need a critique thanks and if you like it please do vote :)
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1445803-my-kind-of-perfect-one-shot
^ That is a one shot, Please crtuque my grammars :) Comments are highly appreciated :D
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newyorkgurl
Joined: 2011-10-19Posts: 1411 months agoHey ! I really need an honest opinion about my story. Title: Scintillescent Dreams Genre: Teen Fiction Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1435245-scintillescent-dreams Thank you so much xoxo
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loviedovy12
Joined: 2011-06-25Posts: 52011 months ago@hearmeroar555 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1004738-the-princess-switch Hope you enjoy it!
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RandomlyStrange
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OmNomNom_
Joined: 2011-12-19Posts: 8611 months agoHere's my story..
Title: By My Side Da link--->http://www.wattpad.com/story/1182088-by-my-side
I hope it's okay:D
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NightSky018
Joined: 2011-11-12Posts: 102511 months agoSadistically Sweet Thrller/Suspense/Mystery
After saving a young girl from being hit by a car, Haitlin Brookes had no idea her life would change forever. She didn’t expect the girl’s father to be a sadistic man, neither did she expect to get kidnapped. Now Haitlin has to find a way to escape his hold, but it won’t be easy.
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