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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
Rules :) best critique deals around right up in here!!!! 1. My critiques are legit- yours need to be too:) 2. http://www.wattpad.com/3654289-one-moment-prequel once I see ur critique I go 3. Password is "Can't wait for summer!" 4. Now for the deals, lovelies:) 5. Oh but wait... First 6 get in :) Deal 1: I read ur first chap and critique & u do same:) Deal 2: I fan u, u critique Deal 3: you critique my 1st 2 chaps, I do ur 1st too and possibly vote and def fan! Deal 4: you make me a good trailor I critique 10 chapters Deal 5: we fan each other, add story to each others library, and comment on each others 1st two chappies :) Ps good luck and happy wattpadding And if u don't put password I cannot do any deals:( |
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LiveBetter Joined: 2012-02-20 Posts: 754 |
1 year ago
Can't wait for summer! OMG 0.0 Your name is my main character's name! I was just gonna come here to actually critique for the first time. I was like "Why not help a person out?" Then I saw your name and I'm like 0.0.... I've go to check this out. Anyway check this out: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1100015-evil-is-her-name I wasn't really looking for it, but I'll take deal 3.... Warning...my first chapters are kinda unedited but feel free to point those out! P.S. I love your name! |
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wecomefrommars Joined: 2012-05-10 Posts: 96 |
1 year ago
can't wait for summer! except the heat... i can wait for the heat..... I was hoping someone would like to read my story. It's definitely undiscovered, and I don't know if it's any good.... |
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slimshadyjr Joined: 2011-11-13 Posts: 286 |
1 year ago
i really can wait for summer, but ok, I can't wait for summer http://www.wattpad.com/2675906-miss-416 @gisellelives anyway, i guess Deal 5 would be pretty cool, off to yours! |
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
@LiveBetter6 @wecomefrommars @slimshadyjr Hey I'm workin on u guys! Haha I'll try to do them today and tomorrow:) doubt it'll take any longer! But thanks for the great feedback:) hope u may even want to continue reading and I hope I want to continue reading urs too:) Much love:) <3 |
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wecomefrommars Joined: 2012-05-10 Posts: 96 |
1 year ago
thank you! i really appreciate it! |
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LiveBetter Joined: 2012-02-20 Posts: 754 |
1 year ago
@gisellelives I honestly enjoyed your book and will keep reading it. And I'm not just saying it because you have the same name as the character in my book. ;) I voted because I liked it and Chris is one of the types of guys I love. |
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potterheads4thewin Joined: 2012-02-10 Posts: 434 |
1 year ago
@gisellelives Can't wait for summer! K so i will take deal 2 but instead of critquing my first 2 chapters could you critique chapters 2 and 3 please. Here is the link http://www.wattpad.com/4738674-the-girl-who-lived-a-hp-fan-fiction-chapter-2-i off to yours now |
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myfictions Joined: 2012-04-28 Posts: 504 |
1 year ago
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
Done! @LiveBetter6 |
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
@wecomefrommars Starting yours! You didnt specify a deal so imma do 1st chap and fan:) |
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
Doneeeeee :) @wecomefrommars |
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
@potterheads4thewin Okay um u wanna read deal two again cuz all that is = I fan u and you critique for me Hahaha you can choose again :) no biggie:) |
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
Doneeeeee:) @slimshadyjr |
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_gisellelives Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 386 |
1 year ago
Done I really enjoyed yours! @myfictions |
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myfictions Joined: 2012-04-28 Posts: 504 |
1 year ago
@gisellelives thanks, I'll make a new chapter |