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_gisellelives

Rules :) best critique deals around right up in here!!!!

1. My critiques are legit- yours need to be too:)

2. http://www.wattpad.com/3654289-one-moment-prequel once I see ur critique I go

3. Password is "Can't wait for summer!"

4. Now for the deals, lovelies:)

5. Oh but wait... First 6 get in :)

Deal 1: I read ur first chap and critique & u do same:)

Deal 2: I fan u, u critique

Deal 3: you critique my 1st 2 chaps, I do ur 1st too and possibly vote and def fan!

Deal 4: you make me a good trailor I critique 10 chapters

Deal 5: we fan each other, add story to each others library, and comment on each others 1st two chappies :)

Ps good luck and happy wattpadding And if u don't put password I cannot do any deals:(

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LiveBetter

Can't wait for summer! OMG 0.0 Your name is my main character's name! I was just gonna come here to actually critique for the first time. I was like "Why not help a person out?" Then I saw your name and I'm like 0.0.... I've go to check this out. Anyway check this out: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1100015-evil-is-her-name I wasn't really looking for it, but I'll take deal 3.... Warning...my first chapters are kinda unedited but feel free to point those out!

P.S. I love your name!

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wecomefrommars

@gisellelives

can't wait for summer! except the heat... i can wait for the heat.....

I was hoping someone would like to read my story. It's definitely undiscovered, and I don't know if it's any good....

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1341449-love-me-cancerously

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slimshadyjr

i really can wait for summer, but ok, I can't wait for summer

http://www.wattpad.com/2675906-miss-416

@gisellelives anyway, i guess Deal 5 would be pretty cool, off to yours!

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_gisellelives

@LiveBetter6 @wecomefrommars @slimshadyjr

Hey I'm workin on u guys! Haha I'll try to do them today and tomorrow:) doubt it'll take any longer! But thanks for the great feedback:) hope u may even want to continue reading and I hope I want to continue reading urs too:)

Much love:) <3

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wecomefrommars

@gisellelives

thank you! i really appreciate it!

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LiveBetter

@gisellelives I honestly enjoyed your book and will keep reading it. And I'm not just saying it because you have the same name as the character in my book. ;) I voted because I liked it and Chris is one of the types of guys I love.

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potterheads4thewin

@gisellelives Can't wait for summer! K so i will take deal 2 but instead of critquing my first 2 chapters could you critique chapters 2 and 3 please. Here is the link http://www.wattpad.com/4738674-the-girl-who-lived-a-hp-fan-fiction-chapter-2-i off to yours now

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