Constructive Criticism

Hi! I'm really enjoying the story I'm writing. I was wondering if anyone can look at it a Critique it, to see where I need to improve before going on? Thanks! To Catch a Crush http://www.wattpad.com/story/461882-to-catch-a-crush

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Moving this over to the Critiquing forum as it seems better suited for over there.

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