Need constructive critisism?

Send me a link to whatever you would like me to read and ill give you some insight. :)

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@DestinyRoseBidinger http://www.wattpad.com/story/1298384-freak Please check out the first chapter and tell me what you think of it.[: If you like it, reading the other chapters and voting would mean the world. Thanks! xx(:

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@DestinyRoseBidinger Check out my story too^.^ it's the only one on my page at the moment.

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@DestinyRoseBidinger http://www.wattpad.com/story/1304061-the-girl-who-lived-a-hp-fan-fiction I hope you like it

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Book 1; Revenge is a Bitch.

After watching her family get massacared by a clan of Vampires, Olivia Thorn's life changes for the worst. Unlike most teenagers her age, Seventeen year old Olivia, becomes a Hunter, she struggles with life, as she discovers more about the new life she has made for herself- forgetting her old one. This all changes one day, when she gets saved by a mysterious stranger and her Gaurdian Angel, both who make drastic changes to her life forever. Know out to get those who brought pain unto her, and who killed for family, Olivia is out for blood. As she gets closer to putting her family to rest, only one thing is evident in her mind... Revenge is a Bitch.

Thanks err heres the link... http://www.wattpad.com/4128498-the-hard-knock-life-of-olivia-thorn-revenge-is-a

Thank you xxx @DestinyRoseBidinger

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I have a few but please read Isla and the Genie!! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1025369-knowing-you%27re-there Knowing You're There : Xylia Thomas has always tried to fit in with everyone else. But there's one feature that sets her apart from the rest of the crowd: she's blind. The few friends she has are in relationships, and she longs to find love. That's when she meets Kurt, and knows she has found everything in a guy she could possibly dream of- a best friend, band mate, and soul mate.

Isla and the Genie: http://www.wattpad.com/3248774-isla-and-the-genie (1 Page short story) Isla is on a vacation, not enjoying herself. She accidentally stumbles upon a genie bottle on the beach,and is given more than she could ever wish for. (Short story #12!!!)

Crash: http://www.wattpad.com/story/970295-crash Bayleigh is a very spoiled girl living the life of luxury. She gets her joy out of picking on others that have less than her, Especially Adriana, who lives in poverty. But suddenly, their family loses everything. They are forced to move into the only place they can afford: the trailer park, right across from Adriana! Will she even survive?

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Hey there!

Can you do a specific chapter (or all five parts)? Chapter 4 mehbeh? Humor:

'It's Called Acting'

http://www.wattpad.com/3690445-it%27s-called-acting-prologue

@DestinyRoseBidinger

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@DestinyRoseBidinger Please can you read mine and tell me what you think http://www.wattpad.com/3325225-perception-watty-2012-maybe-prologue

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@DestinyRoseBidinger Here's mine: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1363582-black-dove...it's not finished yet, though. Critiquing any of the chapters would be great :D

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@DestinyRoseBidinger Hey heres a co-write :3 I hope you enjoy it :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/673631-the-urbem-completed

Thank sin advance :3

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1393799-it-was-that-day

PLEASE COMMENT HONESTLY:}

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Red: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1388426-red

Thank you. ^_^

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@DestinyRoseBidinger

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1251791-the-lost-dreamer

When fifteen-year-old Eden Paris discovers that not only is she not human but rather, a descendant of gods and angels, a demiangel, she is plunged into the world of the Ethereal Society, a society of the higher half-bloods. Eden is determined to sever herself from the world she thought only existed in books and fairytales but it seems that the only way to get out of the mess her Scent caused her was to tie herself to the handsome yet intolerable and haughty young William Sage as his Consor, a warrior sworn by blood and soul to protect his other to death.

Something stirs outside of the protective barrier of the Sanctuary. More and more demiangels have been reported kidnapped and hadn't been discovered nor heard from anyone. When Eden learns that her best friend is in grave danger, she is drawn deeper into the secrets of the Hidden World.

In this adventure packed novel, Eden learns that some things are rather much better off hidden under the covers of her books.

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@DestinyRoseBidinger:

can you do this one

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1378559-sacrifices

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Why thank you!

http://www.wattpad.com/4190126-the-average-lives-of-above-average-teens The Average Lives of Above Average Teens

This is an epic tale, more undiscovered than gem, about the Ursula P. Bradley Institution for the Gifted.

Never heard of it? Well, that's because you're not exceptional enough to make the cut.

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@DestinyRoseBidinger

http://www.wattpad.com/story/917408-the-revenge-of-the-fallen-watty-award-2012 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1166614-the-war-of-the-mortals-watty-award-2012

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1127600-how-i-got-my-best-friend-back

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@DestinyRoseBidinger http://www.wattpad.com/story/1349027-it%27s-just-business-book-one

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Hi :) My story is called just dream. It's horror and romance Thanks!

http://www.wattpad.com/4772719-just-dream

On the ground near the coffee table, I saw a pale fragile lifeless body. Her auburn hair was covering her face and her head was surrounded with blood. My mother was laying in a pool of blood. I couldn't speak. I couldn't move. I never felt so alone in my life. I looked up to the wall, it said, "YOU'RE NEXT."

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Hey! I really want some feedback on my short story The 11 Victims. It’s kind of a horror story and I’m new to writing horror stories. It won’t take long to read! I would really appreciate it if you could check it out! Please comment and if you like it please vote!! Thanks <3 Alice.

http://www.wattpad.com/4774507-the-11-victims-a-short-story?d=ud

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1393799-it-was-that-day Please read this story it is a short suspenseful story. It is about a young girl who finds herself in the middle of a calamity. She does not know who she is or what she saw, or why she is being held captive by the government. It is all based on what this girl saw that day. Please read

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@DestinyRoseBidinger

http://www.wattpad.com/story/962211-little-n-large-watty-awards-2012

Nicole Crystal Welsh is starting her sophomore year at her California performing Arts school with the best social status possible- a floater. Someone popular enough to hang with the popular crowd yet still have the ability to sit with newbies or freshmen. In a place where looks are everything Nicole is beyond satisfied with her position when the inevitable happens- girl meets boy. Floaters are usually loners but Nicole is popular enough to make it work, that's not the issue. The problem is Caleb is a whopping 5'6 and Nicole is 6'1. In a place where looks are everything Nicole must find the strength to break the cookie cutter mold or lose everything she's ever worked for with a few bumps along the way.

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@DestinyRoseBidinger

I was hoping someone would like to read my story. It's definitely undiscovered, and I don't know if it's any good....

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1341449-love-me-cancerously

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@DestinyRoseBidinger I do!

Here are the links. :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1340957-till-death-does-its-part, On going

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1312337-producing-parents, Completed.

Thank you so much. ♥

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