Ill give detailed critiquing for free!!

hurry! I need stuff to read and plus i just love commenting on stuff! aHaha

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Please read the prologue and description a of my story. Tell me whether or not you like it and if you think others will. Please be honest, even if you hate it. Don't complain about grammar though, only content. Title: Define:Insanity. Author: Amy C.R. User: penirose. Thanks!

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heyy i'd love for you to read my stories if its not to much to ask. I have three for you to choose from. a vampire story http://www.wattpad.com/story/1248732-the-vampires-slave a romance type of story http://www.wattpad.com/story/1285825-the-masochist last but not least an actiony story! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1349109-taken thankks and enjoy your pick!!! :) :3

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^^^^^^done!!^^^^^^^^^^^6

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Here's my story Raven if your interested: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1300756-raven

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@smilemedead hi! Could you read mine? http://www.wattpad.com/story/1290887-sinking-hearts Thanks :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1330317-sincerely-your-worst-nightmare

Sincerely, Your Worst Nightmare

When I was six, an extraordinary person came into my life. Dressed in all black with crimson red eyes, he wasn't an imaginary friend, nor did he scare and creep me out. Although he's an adult, he chose to be my friend. I'm older now though, and he has changed. He no longer acts like my friend, but more like a stalker. He doesn't scare me; he terrifies me. He teases me, chides me, calls me Grace-less. I can't dream anymore - he gives me nightmares. When I'm awake, I'm living a nightmare. Want to know what it's like? Turn the page. Maybe you can be my new friend

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1125125-single-caffeine

Hi! I would love some feedback on this && if oyu enjoy it that is a plus!

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Could you please take a look at :

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1342215-secrets-secrets-are-no-fun

The last comment said I needed to break up two paragraphs, so I'm getting a friend to look it over & help me. But other than that, comment on what you want! :D thanks

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@smilemedead I'd love some feedback on my story. (: http://www.wattpad.com/2962983-a-blood-moon-chapter-one-unforgettable

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@smilemedead Here you go xD

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@smilemedead Hello! Will you please critique mine?

Mystery(any from chapter 3 and up):

or my romance short story:

thank you!:))

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@smilemedead http://www.wattpad.com/story/1321967-high-school-of-the-dead http://www.wattpad.com/4494182-the-white-woman

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Hi! Would you please critique mine too? I think I have a serious problem with the verb tenses and there's this hole in the plot I can't pinpoint. XD http://www.wattpad.com/story/1349791-found-love-in-a-hopeless-place-happily-ever-after

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@smilemedead

http://www.wattpad.com/story/962211-little-n-large-watty-awards-2012

Nicole Crystal Welsh is starting her sophomore year at her California performing Arts school with the best social status possible- a floater. Someone popular enough to hang with the popular crowd yet still have the ability to sit with newbies or freshmen. In a place where looks are everything Nicole is beyond satisfied with her position when the inevitable happens- girl meets boy. Floaters are usually loners but Nicole is popular enough to make it work, that's not the issue. The problem is Caleb is a whopping 5'6 and Nicole is 6'1. In a place where looks are everything Nicole must find the strength to break the cookie cutter mold or lose everything she's ever worked for with a few bumps along the way.

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Title: Lost to Lovely

[Completed]

http://www.wattpad.com/story/954882-lost-to-lovely

"[Trigger warning: mild boyxboy] Two boys. Different problems. One solution. Run.

Theo Jennings in just another lowly hybrid. After months of abuse and torment from his previous owner he's found himself back at the pound. When a sleazy bum opts to adopt him, Theo hasn't the slightest clue his life is about to make a turn for the worse. Jacques Monroe is a pampered rich kid. His father is strict and abusive. When one day his father does something that will make Jacques never look at him the same way again, Jacques makes a snap decision. With a slip of fate and a risky decision, the two boys meet. Their friendship is grand, maybe even a little bit more. But with ghosts of their past on their tail and the cruel eyes of society judging their every move, the boy's relationship is threatened. Will their relationship survive? Or better yet, will they?"

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Heyhey, can you please please please check out mine? My Enlgish isn't that great and I'd REALLY appreciate it c:

Thank you so muchh!!! :D

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1346983-awake

Ghost watching your every move, monsters chasing and attacking you. Fear is taking over your body, your only option is to find a safe place. You start to run but know it wont work.. And then you wake up. Everything is okay again, the monsters are gone. But what if you turn on the light and notice you've taken the monsters with you?

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@smilemedead hey please could you critique my story? I mean, its only been posted yesterday, so theres two parts up :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1342745-burning-desire-sequel-to-burning-paradise

Last summer, Donna and Rhys fell in love. After a long battle and a tiring year, Donna and Rhys feel they can finally get to know each other. But, the Master has something more in store for the star-crossed lovers.... Donna visits Rhys' hometown, Arizona and there, another battle commences, this one darker and deadlier, threatening everything Donna's ever known. Will Donna and Rhys be able to overcome this test? Or will their love succumb to the Masters' wishes? Find out in Burning Desire, The Sequel to Burning Paradise...

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@smilemedead Hi! Please please please read chapter 1 of mine... If you like it, feel free to read all :) I really need some sort of feedback. Thanks in advance.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1183614-breathe-under-water-shadows-of-the-night-1

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Knowing You're There: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1025369-knowing-you%27re-there Lia is the girl that everyone knows at school: she's the blind girl that always has her dog at her side. Of course, like everyone, Lia dreams of finding love. When ages been rejected her whole life because of being unable to see, she doesn't belive it when Kurt comes along, telling her she's beautiful. This is the story of two people that show, love ISN'T blind.

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@smilemedead Hi could you critique a chapter of Midnight Disaster? Thanks in advance :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1205946-midnight-disaster-~watty-awards-2012~

Sidenote: This is not an ET story people will die!! Cameron and Maya are great friends (sometimes borderline dating) looking for something to keep them entertained in their annual summer adventure. Little do they know it comes to them in the form of an abandoned alien. At first their main concern is keeping him hidden from the public and their friends until they realize that something is really wrong with the alien. On the night of the full moon they discover their true problem. Their hometown is in grave danger.

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@smilemedead http://www.wattpad.com/story/1251791-the-lost-dreamer

When fifteen-year-old Eden Paris discovers that not only is she not human but rather, a descendant of gods and angels, a demiangel, she is plunged into the world of the Ethereal Society, a society of the higher half-bloods. Eden is determined to sever herself from the world she thought only existed in books and fairytales but it seems that the only way to get out of the mess her Scent caused her was to tie herself to the handsome yet intolerable and haughty young William Sage as his Consor, a warrior sworn by blood and soul to protect his other to death.

Something stirs outside of the protective barrier of the Sanctuary. More and more demiangels have been reported kidnapped and hadn't been discovered nor heard from anyone. When Eden learns that her best friend is in grave danger, she is drawn deeper into the secrets of the Hidden World.

In this adventure packed novel, Eden learns that some things are rather much better off hidden under the covers of her books.

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