Share your vampire(Or anytype) story here !

Hi guys come here to share your story ill try my hardest to read them and comment :)

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Hey could you try mine. I am currently looking for feedback to see if the format works. http://www.wattpad.com/4475244-life-of-the-rock-star I have a ghost book if you want to check that out too.

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ok ill brb

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thanks

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so far ive only read the first 3 pages but it sounds good there was some spelling mistakes and parts that i think would improve the story if you added more detail but besides that i really enjoyed it and you are very talented keep writeing! :)

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thanks. I was a bit worried about it talking from two peoples views, didn't know if it would work.

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i think it worked pretty well :)

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cool thanks.i wrote it like two years ago so was a bit unsure about it, the rest needs editing, just hope i find time to finish it. If it's popular i may have to edit chapter two this week.

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can u tell me what u think of mine? http://www.wattpad.com/4146145-blood-bites i have lots of spellling mistakes i did it on my ipod sorry :P (Btw im 11 so it might kind of weird)

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yeah that's ok no one is perfect i will take a look now. want me to say what i think here?

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yes plz :)

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Yea it's really good not many mistakes but some. You done well with this, you really have.

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thanks :)

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no problem,keep at it.

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whenever people read it they think its all messed up but its actually a dark love story with areally sad ending

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the evil one is not who you think

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ah ok. well it's good you know the ending then. how long you planning on making it?

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well i wanted to make a chapbook but im not sure my mom disaproves of it she says its disgusting becuz of the blood

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ah well, maybe you could cut the blood out, just for now lol

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yeah it would be weird thpugh cuz its a vam,piare stroy but i try :P (sorry i type weird|P)

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yeah there is that, kinda a major factor in it, doesn't matter i understand you

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ok and lol

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the other choice you have is not tell your mum lol

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shhh its a secret lol :P yeah i am just delteing every email i get frome here

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Could you read mine it's called Teeth and it's complete in my page if you want to love? ~_^

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