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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
Hi guys come here to share your story ill try my hardest to read them and comment :) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
Hey could you try mine. I am currently looking for feedback to see if the format works. http://www.wattpad.com/4475244-life-of-the-rock-star I have a ghost book if you want to check that out too. |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
ok ill brb |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
thanks |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
so far ive only read the first 3 pages but it sounds good there was some spelling mistakes and parts that i think would improve the story if you added more detail but besides that i really enjoyed it and you are very talented keep writeing! :) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
thanks. I was a bit worried about it talking from two peoples views, didn't know if it would work. |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
i think it worked pretty well :) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
cool thanks.i wrote it like two years ago so was a bit unsure about it, the rest needs editing, just hope i find time to finish it. If it's popular i may have to edit chapter two this week. |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
can u tell me what u think of mine? http://www.wattpad.com/4146145-blood-bites i have lots of spellling mistakes i did it on my ipod sorry :P (Btw im 11 so it might kind of weird) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
yeah that's ok no one is perfect i will take a look now. want me to say what i think here? |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
yes plz :) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
Yea it's really good not many mistakes but some. You done well with this, you really have. |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
thanks :) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
no problem,keep at it. |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
whenever people read it they think its all messed up but its actually a dark love story with areally sad ending |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
the evil one is not who you think |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
ah ok. well it's good you know the ending then. how long you planning on making it? |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
well i wanted to make a chapbook but im not sure my mom disaproves of it she says its disgusting becuz of the blood |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
ah well, maybe you could cut the blood out, just for now lol |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
yeah it would be weird thpugh cuz its a vam,piare stroy but i try :P (sorry i type weird|P) |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
yeah there is that, kinda a major factor in it, doesn't matter i understand you |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
ok and lol |
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terencebrumpton Joined: 2012-04-19 Posts: 1571 |
1 year ago
the other choice you have is not tell your mum lol |
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Mickyandminnie Joined: 2012-04-14 Posts: 223 |
1 year ago
shhh its a secret lol :P yeah i am just delteing every email i get frome here |
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_NOTESandLYRICS Joined: 2011-09-24 Posts: 1519 |
1 year ago
Could you read mine it's called Teeth and it's complete in my page if you want to love? ~_^ |