Telling honestly what I think about your story *NO CATCH* Nagtatagalog rin ako, wag matakot.

NO HARD FEELINGS! Promote your story (1 only!! if STORIES I would ask you which and it would make you fall back in line to the waiting list!!) below and Imma read chapter 1 then comment to you HERE what I think about the story. REQUIREMENTS: - checking out my stories : http://www.wattpad.com/6781231-eyes-open and http://www.wattpad.com/story/3272992-them (both are optional) - eyes - hands - and a heart of a human I demand a password, I change this every time so check this frequently, kay? PASSWORD: Earth's core OKAY, GOOOO!! :) No password? You're gonna experience hell early.

**This applies to pages 17 and above: Reply to this comment if you want me to tell you if it had a spark or not. What spark? Read the first comment on page 17 :)

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No one?

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1260415-accuser

The prologue is only a few paragraphs....

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1256573-fights-over-hoops

Its - Fights Over Hoops

I'd like to know what you think ......... Let me know

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Hate and love; both rooted in passion... Pain and pleasure; both craven... Immortal and mortal; both ruled by the animal within... When the fight between man and woman becomes a battle between mortal and immortal. When a boy learns that sometimes the darkness within is merely the absence of light; the very light that was hiding the man inside. After eighteen years of mortality - of ignorance -Draven Renati soon learns that the line between love and hate is often blurred. That sometimes the most beautiful, compelling, whispers hold the bloodiest of secrets. That the most torturous of pains can mask the most incredible of pleasures. Two men and two women. Four times the passion. Four times the pain. And all it took was a single nightmare...

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1164283-whispering-knives

heading over right now...cheers xx

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1199447-across-the-border thanks, off to yours

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@callmeishaa

THANK YOU! Heading to yours now!

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@callmeishaa I commented ! :D Whoop whoop!

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@tangledsparks hahahahah. thaaanks <3

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@callmeishaa Title: His Personal Assistant

Genre: Fan Fiction, Romance

Summary: "I'm his personal assistant!" Anya Underwood always dreamed of kissing Josh Hutcherson, a famous young actor who portrays different roles from different famous movies. When she was hired as personal assistant, she has the chance to get to be close with Josh. Will she have the chance to kiss him like she had in her dreams?

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/4339907-his-personal-assistant-chapter-two

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Summary: “If I tutor you, will you teach me guitar?”

Mia brown is just heading into college, finding a strange boy with a guitar who is actually is in her Maths class he asks her to tutor him and all she wants in return is to learn to play the guitar. Starting off as a close friendship they learn new things about each other and finding out about their family’s secrets could keep them apart. An evil step mother, hearts broken, tears shed. Can they keep their love when there so close but yet so far apart? Will this be a happy ever after?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1208645-a-warm-embrace

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okay, im reading your story right now :D heres a link to mine http://www.wattpad.com/story/1271511-the-return-of-the-legend

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@Madhu10101 I honestly think that the idea of the story is common and you put a twist into it. And I suggest that you make the story unpredictable and the ending spectacular. That's what I think :)

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@NobleWolf I went to read Chapter one. as I said so, above. Honestly, I'm no fan of history. HAHAH :) I think ugh, I'm no good in historical sorry. I think that if you ever put an unknown language, you must put the translation. :)

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@TashHill Your story is so rare!! That is what I call a hooking story and you have a spectacular vocabulary. I have nothing to say to your story. :)

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Thanks for the suggestion, really appriciate it !! :-)

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@Aponycalleddenny Chapter 1 is touching. And is short. I Have no idea what will happen next to your story, but I think that the ending of your story is gonna be what the other wolf stories here say. I say, be one of a kind :)

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@Madhu10101 hahaha. you''re welcome. And feel like a freaking teacher now, hahhahaha :DD

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@callmeishaa If you like it please vote. And can you tell me what you think by commenting? Thanks! xX

"Just A Dare" (Watty Awards/Romance)

It was a mean thing to do, I admit. And I wasn't a mean person. But I did it anyways.

"It's just a dare," she said. "and it's not like you'll ever see them again." She persuaded me and I couldn't argue with her logic. I was moving across the state. So, I thought I would never see them again. You only live once, you know?

But I never knew that dare would make such a big impact on my life.

LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1212867-just-a-dare

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@tangledsparks Well, that story literally touch my heart and very unpredictable. I love that fact :)

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The Wattersons life seems perfect, they have a big home, money to spare and extremly talented children, no one the community would think bad of them. But behind closed doors their life is miserable. With an alcoholic mother, abusive father, and a sucidal brother, Amy thinks she'll never find true happiness in life, that is until Sam Bowers moved in next door. Can this Melbourne boy help Amy escape the misery that is her life, or will he do anothing like the rest?

Angst/Romance

http://www.wattpad.com/4318235-possibility-chapter-one

@callmeishaa

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@AWriterDreamer HAHA. I read chapter one and not chapter two as I said so above, hope you don't mind, but I don't break my word :) Your chapter 1 is very informative, I like that but I think that sometimes when you put too much fact in a story, some readers will not like your story because your ruining their imagination.

I don't know maybe it's just me ;) And I like how you put songs in your story :)

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This is my story and book trailer. I hope you guys can enjoy! Please comment and let me know your honest opinions. Inbox me with your own work, and I'd be more than glad to read it as well!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1262066-eternal-fate-the-collectors-watty-awards-2012

“By 3012, Earth was destroyed. By 3290, the only human survivors left were enslaved. Humanity's only hope lies in Michael. Born from the water, he must protect those he loves, deal with his inner humanity, and save the world he helped destroy.”

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When Natalie sees an advertisement for a housekeeping job, she thinks it would be great! She is in need of a job and she doesn't mind cleaning, but when she gets the job, it's not great, because she's FALLING FOR HER BOSS! If there is one thing that her mother has taught her about employment, it's that you don't mix buisness with pleasure! Can she swallow her feelings and continue to work, or will her feelings overcome her? This fast-paced romance and comedy will keep you entertained throughout the story!

http://www.wattpad.com/921164-falling-for-the-boss-watty-awards-2011

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@Rainbow_Butterflies I think that some happenings on your chapter 1 is not needed for your story. Like, why did she go to the library? Did something happen there? Do you get me? :)

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