Telling honestly what I think about your story *NO CATCH* Nagtatagalog rin ako, wag matakot.

Hey there, here's my story. Clicking on the cover below will lead you to the story. Go on! :)

Thank you so much!

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@GottaReadMe Um, I've read stories that starts with a dare. I think you grab that idea and turn in into your story. It seems predictable. I suggest make the ending unforgettable and I might just buy your book ;)

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@MidnightBender I love the way you introduce your characters in your chapter 1 and describe them. Your words, really. I got nothing more to say :)

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@TWriter I love your idea! And I think none of the people here have thought it yet. Continue with your story, it might reach a hundred thousand views. :)

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@callmeishaa *hug* thank you!

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hehe thankss!!! I garentee it will be different. :D that was our main aim for our srtory @callmeishaa

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@thisisbekah HAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHA. And that is what I have to say, a series of laughs. You made me smile, even if I think the idea was common and known, it was a great way because you put a smile to the readers faces.

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@Aponycalleddenny HAHAHAHA. It's because I want stories to be unpredictable and even if it's predictable, I want to at least have an effect at the reader :)

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@Ria_Lee I like the fact that every chapter describes the character. And I don't know anything more to say. Yes, I've read chapter one but I feel like I would judge it too early, by not reading the whole book. So it got me hooked. :)

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@callmeishaa Thanks! I'm happy you got hooked. Read on! :D

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I'm really sorry if someone is upset or anything. I'm gonna upload a chapter to my story, and I'll read the others later.

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@callmeishaa

Here's my link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1073118-just-my-luck

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I would love some feed back!!

My story is called: The Two Princesses

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1019212-the-two-princesses

Please tell me what you really think of it...

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Hi, I just posted a story and I was wondering if you could check it out? I don't know if I should continue...thanks! :)

It's 1960, and nobody's safe. A seventeen-year-old girl, Elizabeth, has found out that the love of her life is being drafted for the Vietnam war. Not only that, but just before he goes, her parents find out about their relationship, and they don't like it. Now, in a haste to find who she is, Elizabeth will runaway, happy to be anywhere but home, or so she thinks.

http://www.wattpad.com/4315749-untitled

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@xRosesnevercrYx The Chapter 1 is detailed. I just have a suggestion. Can you make the direct speeches with double qoutes. It just bothers me. But if you don't want its fine. :)

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@aviannette And so basically, your story is narrated. The idea itself was common but I don't know what the coconut is the ending. So hats off :)

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@Bigail Okay your question bothers me. Why the heck will you not continue it? It's a story!! A story!! Even if it suck and was a sad excuse of a story (which is not) You should continue it! No matter what :)

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Hi ^^

I invite you to read my story :D Hope you like it!! Comment with you thoughts!!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1173816-the-last-wish

Rachna Rajput is a famous author with three best selling books and millions of fans who just love to hate her books. But there is one thing that no one knows about her. A secret hidden away in her past that is slowly mentally destroying her future. One day when a little girl asks for her autograph, hidden memories come to light. Wishes that change everything. Be careful what you wish for

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People here! Or anyone who is hooked or like my story! Please read it. Chapter 3 is out. Peace! http://www.wattpad.com/4341477-death-of-june-chapter-3-snap

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@callmeishaa okay thanks:) Ill be sure to change it when i have time :)

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@callmeishaa Thanks. :)

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Hi, I was wondering if you could read a little of my story and tell me what you think. It's called 'We Don't Date Players' Anyways thanks

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@Bigail Oh and thanks for reading my story!! <3 Tell me, how was the story so far? :)

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@xRosesnevercrYx But if it bothers you and don't feel like it, then don't. You created the story with your heart it must not be changed into someone else's. Thanks :)

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@Amehsk Okaaayyy. So, for me, as a reader, honestly, I hate pharagraphs that stuck together. You may put some spaces to make it friendly to the eyes but not too much. That's just it. You're story is great but I want to feel something and I did. So good work!! :)

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