Looking For A Genuine Review Before I Post Up Another Chapter!


  • KeiraDawson
    KeiraDawson
    1 year ago

    Hello! I'm asking for help from at least five or seven people. I'm three chapters into a story and I'm looking for a review on what you guys think of the story so far before I add more. If you want I can check your story out too and tell you what I think. ^_^ Thank you in advance! *P.S please if you are going to say its good or bad could you leave a reason?"

    Title: Cracked Glass Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1167301-cracked-glass Genre: Teen Fiction/ Mystery/ Suspense/ Action/ Drama/ Tragedy/ Romance **Somewhat of an Adventure** Description: In the near future the U.S.A passed the act of supervision. Which required every U.S citizen to be monitored at all times, the passing of this act is unknown to most of the American people. Cassie Mitchelle grew up in the same two star town for her whole life. She knew the names of people by heart, the shortcuts on tact and which kids were not to be trusted. Or so she believed, when Cassie makes a startling discovery at her school office that no one was ever supposed to see the world goes into chaos. She can't even depend on her family,friends and boyfriend for help. Leaving for her to fend for her life with the help of refugees, her little brother and off-set neighbor.

    Once again thank you!

  • MonaChiedu
    MonaChiedu
    1 year ago

    i like it. its hard for me myself to write stuff like yours. i stick to romance. would you mind reading mine and reviewing too. its hard people don't always tell me what they think of m y stuff

  • KeiraDawson
    KeiraDawson
    1 year ago

    @MonaAlona Which one? And thank you!

  • MonaChiedu
    MonaChiedu
    1 year ago

    @KeiraDawson you've got talent. the wanted: one daddy