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Title: Ember (A Hunger Games Fan-Fiction)

Plot: Death. That's what awaits the tributes who are chosen to compete in the Hunger Games. And for sixteen-year-old Ivy Fox, this new fate is inevitable. This time around, the tributes are as strong and as furious as ever, so her chances of survival are even slimmer than she first imagined. One day into the training sessions shows her what she's up against, and the only way to come out alive is to show them what she's got - and if that's not enough, then nothing is.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1270350-and-there-came-a-day hope you like it.

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Here's mine

http://www.wattpad.com/3783202-step-1-you-parent-engage-you-without-your-consent?p=1#votes

The story follows the girl by the name of Khanak Singham. She's rich and always gets things the way she has wanted. In short, She's a happy citizen of the Great United States of America. That is until her father engages her to his best friend's son Zayn Malik. Khanak isn't happy and she'll go to any length to break the marriage; inconspicuously that is.

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@DrummerXChick Would like a critque fast! :P

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1240212-fading-howls

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1233145-to-hell-with-popularity

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Azure Des is a puppet, a demonic feeding tool that keeps demons lached to earth, for without them demons couldn't survive in our realm. In an extremely unlikly encounter with a dying man named Ceil Ryder, his whole life changes when he disocvers that there is a way to become free of his restraints of being a puppet by becoming an exorcist, but Ceil has left some holes in the story. Why did he call Azure young hellbourne? Why was he in the demonic realm in the first place when no human should be able to enter it? Azure must figure out all these answers and put together the secrets one by one to figure out who Ceil Ryder really was, and more importantly, who he himself is.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1268290-the-hellbourne-exorsist

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