Will critique your story . Maybe even fan . {OPEN}

There's only a couple of chapters so far, but I'd really appreciate your feedback. Thanks in advance. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1243682-a-version-of-events-book-1-raven

BLURB:

Hi I'm Raven and this is my version of events. Being of Non-Human status was fine in the Human world, it was when I was forced to move to the other realms that things started to get complicated. Vampires, Shifters, and Witches, oh my! Dorothy and Toto have got nothing on my adventure. I have recorded my journey through this crazy world filled with so much more than Humans can imagine. It might not be where the story began, because I don't think anyone remembers any more, but it starts the moment I stepped into the story. Follow me.

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Thanks for helping!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @SecretDivision I WANT A PICKLE!!!!!!!!!!!! the first one: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1139497-my-life-on-mute and the second one: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1166981-grey-wolf

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I need some serious feedback on my story...will someone be honest and read it? It has grammatical errors&some misspellings but I'm working on that:) So please give me honest feedback... It's called Gangster Love...

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Title: Transparent

Genre: Romance, Teen Fiction, Fantasy, Humor(Future), Highschool Setting

Summary: This story revolves around Catherine Cassio, a girl who unexpectantly dies due to a car crash, after running off in seeing a misunderstood situation between her boyfriend, Asher, and rival, Khimberly. In the afterlife, she meets a mysterious stranger who introduces herself as Patrice. Patrice tells Catherine she's given another chance at love, at the cost of her life and a new one. Catherine complies; and this, is where her adventure begins. Reborn as Zayne Willows, follow Catherine as she uncovers the mystery and truth behind her death, face the most tremendous of betrayals, and most especially, get back the love of her life.

Click to read!

I hope you'll like it! Oh and btw, it's 100% Non-Horror. Thanks! :)

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Is this one of the genres in my list up top ^ ? @WiltedWonderland

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I'll get back to you asap : ) @GottaReadMe

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I will get back to you as soon as I can. @CatherineFallon

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kk i'll get to it asap @readerNwriter

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Yay! Thank you @SecretDivision

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Can I have the Url for it please .@Drizzjad89

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Okay I'll get to it @Dopeynessence

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Dear, @Dopeynessence, @CatherineFallon, @Drizzjad89, @GottaReadMe, @readerNwriter, @WiltedWonderland

I will get to you all as soon as I can. I will start tonight and hopefully end by tomorrow.

-Secret Division

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Dear,

@Dopeynessence, @readerNwriter, @GottaReadMe

your feedback has already been given. If you have any questions or comments message me and I would happily respond : )

-Secret Division

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Dear,

@WiltedWonderland, @Drizzjad89

I need my questions answered please and thank you.

-Secret Division

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1237615-new-girl

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@SecretDivision llz ummm how do you get the URL? I have never done this before:)

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Here's my story.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1176686-burning-passion

Thank you in advance!

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Go to your story and copy the url at the top of your internet screen and paste it in here @Drizzjad89

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@SecretDivision ok thanks:)

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Here it is...http://www.wattpad.com/story/327383-gangster-love@SecretDivision

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Thanks @Drizzjad89

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@SecretDivision

Can you please do mine.

Here's my story

http://www.wattpad.com/3783202-step-1-you-parent-engage-you-without-your-consent?p=1#votes

The story follows the girl by the name of Khanak Singham. She's rich and always gets things the way she has wanted. In short, She's a happy citizen of the Great United States of America. That is until her father engages her to his best friend's son Zayn Malik. Khanak isn't happy and she'll go to any length to break the marriage; inconspicuously that is.

Thank you.

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Title: Ember (A Hunger Games Fan-Fiction)

Plot: Death. That's what awaits the tributes who are chosen to compete in the Hunger Games. And for sixteen-year-old Ivy Fox, this new fate is inevitable. This time around, the tributes are as strong and as furious as ever, so her chances of survival are even slimmer than she first imagined. One day into the training sessions shows her what she's up against, and the only way to come out alive is to show them what she's got - and if that's not enough, then nothing is.

Thanks

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@SecretDivision Hey! I just posted my first chapter of my first story! It's a One Direction FanFic so if you don't like 1D or FanFics...it might not be the story for you! haha well, I just wanted to see if i was doing anything right, if its catchy, if i might get some readers... idk! please keep the critism to a limit...aka please spare my feelings if i'm really bad! anyways, thank you!(:

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1240212-fading-howls

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1233145-to-hell-with-popularity

Thanks xD

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