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☼ [ @Cassinthe80s ] Cass -> Romance // Teen Fiction // Non-teen Fiction

☼ [ @Tosinganddance ] Olivia -> Action // Adventure // Sci-Fi

☼ [ @Eloquencea ] Johanna -> Short Stories // Humor // Teen Fiction

☼ [ @Sarahthecoldplayer ] Sarah -> Teen Fiction // Romance // Fantasy

☼ [ @Abscond ] Abscond C. -> Poetry // Horror // Fan Fiction

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☼ The Kethanes: Fire by KieronLange // Fanning

☼ A Fatal and Fated Compromise by Shannon K. // Fanning

☼ The Dreamer by LittleMissKhaos // Fanning

☼ I'm Your Victim by Kisselz // Commenting

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Girl In The Attic by SilentNiaAngel // Paid

Crossing Over by Rebellious_Script // Paid

Squekq // Paid

Athenis by Athenis // Paid

Step Brother by exquisiteequeen // Paid

Elixir by Victoria // Paid

Loneliness in Death by RedBloodCell // Paid

Summer Sin by Nessa181 // Unpaid

The House of Fun by Abscond C. // Paid

Hero-ine by Jade Stanley // Paid

FATUM by N.M. // Paid

Alluring in Blood by Savannah25 // Paid

The Summer I'd Never Forget by thewinkyinvasion // Unpaid

The Breaking of Daughn by Hainotna // Paid

How to lose an unwanted fiancé by theseasdaughter // Paid

If you Ever come Back by FallingFromtheSky // Unpaid

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☼ Story Title: Summer Sin

☼ Author Name: Nessa181

☼ Story Genre: Historical Romance

☼ Story Summary:This is about Jenny and Stan and how they have to brake all the rules to be together. This book takes place in England, when women where not to be alone with men. Expecially a man that can make your body get hot. What will Jenny choose the man that makes her blood boil or the society her family put her in,Religion.

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/1692158-summer-sin

☼ Preferred Critic: [Optional] Password: RomanceOnSummerNights

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@nessa181 Accepted (: Which payment type would you like?

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@Cassinthe80s fan critic

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@nessa181 Great:) You got Lauren as your critic. She'll get to it when she logs in!

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@Cassinthe80s ok thank you, and when she is done I can ask for another right.

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@nessa181 Yup(:

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Story Title : Loneliness in Death

Author Name : Megha / RedBloodCell

Genre : Fantasy / Adventure

Story Summary : A girl haunted by her dreams of shadows and lights, haunted by mysterious killings with no explanations. The help she needs, the help no one is willing to give. Her dreams, the stories of untimely deaths, of pasts and presents that haunt her. Of shadows and lights. Souls that walk the streets, souls of shadows, souls of light, creating havoc wherever they go. Her dreams, are the dreams of souls to come. Her importance, not so much, her importance, more than she can imagine.

Story Link : http://www.wattpad.com/story/1233883-loneliness-in-death

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Well, thank you for this, in advance. :)

and, and,

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@RedBloodCell Accepted (: Olivia will be reading your story!

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Bump (:

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☼ Story Title: The House of Fun

☼ Author Name: Abscond C.

☼ Story Genre: Romance - Teen-Fiction

☼ Story Summary: Scarlett Heart, a poor devoted sister of three, is ready to become their sacrifice. Michelle Anderson, Scarlett’s father, perished four months ago, leaving Scarlett and her three sisters and mother penniless. Involuntarily, Scarlett is prepared to become the man of the family since her mom is a useless drug addict; Scarlett supposes someone has to take charge and grasp matters into their own hands, and it’s bound to be her. Besides, this is who she wants to become. In time, she decides it’s ablest to send a letter to the House of Fun, a palace of misinterpretation and sensual fundraising. It’s the only way to provide health and secure income to the family, and that’s exactly what Scarlett wants. She needs something to rely on; something to keep her and her family safe and sound also this is her only chance. And that’s exactly what Mr. Krone; chief of the House of Fun is guaranteed to give her. But is throwing away everything you once believed in even worth the money, buckets and buckets of money? Her virginity is hanging on a thin string, her teenage life is on hold, and will she even be equipped to become a prostitute?

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/4201651-the-house-of-fun

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I'd Also Love To Be A Critique If You Guys Still Have Openings!

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@Cassinthe80s Hey before I post I just have a quick question also cute forum btw :) lol okay focus haha would you mind if I post my story ad instead of writing it out like it has the title and everything else just over a pic if not I am completely fine with doing it written out just asking :D

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☼ Story Title: The Kethanes: Fire

☼ Author Name: KieronLange

☼ Story Genre: Adventure/Fantasy

☼ Story Summary: For Kailen Driee Carter, waiting for the greatest evil to happen to her life wasn’t going to happen. Already an outcast in The School and being handed over to someone else due to pity, she takes the rest of her training into her own hands and manages to do the biggest crime in the history of crimes: Save a vampire from dying. Now with not only a clan of vampires on her tail, but the Witch Hunters still trying to track her down, the girl who thought she lived in Ethowine all her life is slowly starting to realize that there is more to her that she has forgotten; or forced to forget as she searches for someone to finish her training.

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/964256-the-kethanes-fire

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Hi there! I would love to sign up if you're still willing to take in critiquers :)

However, I would love a genuine thought on my story. There are only two chapters so far. Thank you in advance.

☼ Story Title: A Fatal and Fated Compromise

☼ Author Name: Shannon K.

☼ Story Genre: Action, Romance

☼ Story Summary: Lennie Allen is your typical high school student who, like every other teenage girl, wishes for the perfect future with the perfect man, especially in the small town of Whitevale, Alaska. However, her set dream is only washed away when the only family she has left, her brother is reported to be missing. Over a year later, she still finds herself in trauma, anger, confusion, and isolation -- that is until she meets Levi Brayden, a transfer student. Little does she know his true identity, his true purpose, and his dark past. He's an assassin -- or the assassin who may know the truth behind her brother's disappearance. And when she comes in contact with his secrets, she may only be aware of hatred. But would she accept a secret feeling of her own?

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1224311-a-fatal-and-fated-compromise

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☼ Story Title: Elixir

☼ Author Name: Victoria

☼ Story Genre: Adventure/Fantasy

☼ Story Summary: In Otera, nothing is as it seems.

Kayden Mason has lived in Parum, a small town in Otera, all her life. She doesn’t know anything else.

When Kayden, her mother, and little sister, Serissa, are kidnapped by the government and taken to the capitol, Magna, Kayden knows that Otera isn’t a safe place for her and her family. President Hall soon tells her what she must do for them to be released into a life of prosperity.

Kayden quickly accepts this quest in hopes of ever seeing her family again. But what is this quest?

There has always been a legend, a mere whisper in the wind, of the Elixir of Life. It’s said that the Elixir can cure any disease and make its drinker immortal. It was supposedly hidden thousands of years ago by a sorcerer, who was afraid it would fall into the wrong hands, on the Isle of Fabulas. Thousands have gone searching for it yet none of them have returned. It’s Kayden’s job to find this mythical Elixir.

Why her? What is the government hiding? Will Kayden survive?

Along the way, Kayden meets both, friends and enemies and encounters dragons, sea monsters, unicorns and many other creatures thought to be extinct. Kayden soon uncovers the truth behind the questions.

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/3943590-elixir-chapter-1

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☼ Author Name: Savannah25

☼ Story Genre: Paranormal, Vampire

☼ Story Title: Alluring In Blood

☼ Story Summary: Audrey has to be the strangest vampire you'll meet, sarcastic and never to be taken seriously. she lives life home-schooled and bickering with the old woman by the cashier of the town's only grocery. It just had to change someday and it did on the day she witnessed a murder and decided to commit a murder herself. Soon she's tracked by the gifted humans and invited to the Wildmasters school. Upon learning the history of vampires, she starts to learn the history of her own and not to mention of another. Audrey isn't complaining, but she'd rather bicker with the old woman than continue with all this drama.

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1179050-alluring-in-blood-watty-awards-2012

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☼ Story Title: The Breaking of Daughn

☼ Author Name: Hainotna

☼ Story Genre: Teen Fiction

☼ Story Summary: In the beginning Daughn had a perfectly normal child hood with a family and a supportive base. She took it all for granite. Now that her life is nothing like it had been seven years ago, she spends a lot of time loathing herself and situations she finds herself in. Her life has been divided into two sanctions: before and after "the divorce". She hides things away from her closets friends and fights her internal battles on her own. Then their comes a point when old friends that she once thought as lost start appearing within her life once more; how long will she be able to keep her shadows out of the light?

☼ Story Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1232548-the-breaking-of-daughn

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Thanks in advance :)

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