Any Seriously Good Vampire Stories out there?

I am in the need to read something. I do not mind if its still being worked on, short story or a finished story. I do not mind if its a BoyxBoy story either-- in fact, I would love to read some of those too. GirlxGirl's I'm open to try but can't promise you I'll like the story.

I do not mind if its vampire/werewolf, romance/vampire, etc as long as it has a good plot line and its not too overused. But if it is over used then I hope its pretty good for me to like it because its rare for me to like over-used or cliche stories.

Also feel free to recommend any stories for me too!

But for me to read your story, you must tell why I should read it. Justify if and if I like how you justify then I'll read it.

Now, letting you know this now, if I truly honestly like it, I would add it to my library or favorites. If I don't, then sorry, I wasn't interested in the first place or after chapter one or two. I might still comment to give feedback though and this goes for the ones I like too.

Now post away and thank you =D

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I have one for you love! Mine is called "Teeth". It is a sexy action supernatural comedy full of vampires, lycans, demons, and a strong independent badass heroin. I don't go all mushy romantic insta nonsense my stuff is fun, engaging, and full of sexy that would love nothing more than eat your heart out. It't on my page compeleted but I'm self editing. I hope you like it and if not then thank you for taking the time to read it!!!!!!!

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@thunderheart15 hello :) mine's a vampire romance. the first few chaps start out a little slow & more romance based, but that's really to get to know the main characters, like they don't all just fall in love in two seconds like a lot of stories. it's about an 'average' girl, who starts out in college. she's had a mysterious ability all of her life which enables her to feel vibes about things. & starting at college triggers some mysterious dreams. there she meets 2 love interests who are quite the opposte, 1 is a myserious bad boy, the other is connected to her. her life is thrown into chaos when she starts learning things about them & about her past. it's not complete yet (35 chaps though) & it's only been posted for a just under 2 months & is already no.4 vampire story in the watty awards :) hope you like it! if not that's cool :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/947029-dangerous-vibes-watty-awards-2012

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Vanessa and Luis were just two normal twins on vacation in Rome. Well as normal as they could be. Vanessa could see visions of the future, while Luis could heal injuries with a touch of his hand. But one day on their vacation a mysterious women named Heidi shows up and takes them to Volterra. They were ment to be the volturi's dessert but are let to live. They must face a decision, live and join the volturi as vampires, or die and become their next meal. Live or die, your choice. But what happens when Vanessa starts to fall for one of the guards. Will that help her choose her decision?

What if the famous Salvatore brothers had a sister? Well they do and her name is Yency Salvatore. She was turned by her brother damon nine years after he was. Also she is a witch. After over a century of not hearing from her brothers she returns to mystic falls, her home. But when she finds that her brothers are there and finds katherine and her doppleganger, danger arrives for her and she realizes that maybe she isn't a normal vampire/witch and that she was meant to be a huge part in a phsycopathic vampires plan.

Okay so volturi is a volturi fan fiction on these humans that were going to be eaten but then not. There is romance but it doesn't involve them falling in love in a second. I have a whole plot on it hope you check it out.

Salvatore one is about the brothers having a sister. HAS A LOT OF SARCASM! I'm pretty sure it's not the same as others because I also have this one planned out and I haven't seen anyone come up with what I am planning in the next chapters. Hope you like them

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mines a vampire story its kind of an action aswell its called The damned.

Blaze is a vampire with an eidetic (photgraphic memory) she can remeber everything thats ever happened to her, since she was a vampire. Her Human life remains a blur. HUmans created vampires by being foolish ans just too curious for there own good. Never learning there poking there noses in dangerous matter again, releasing a deadly force in the air. Slowly, this force is destroying life as we knoe it: human and vampire. Its up to Vampires to celan up human mess. But how can you hunt when you dont know what your hunting down?

http://www.wattpad.com/4037126-the-damned

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Well, I think my story - Haventon Born - is seriously good, but I'm rather biased.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1128674-the-haventon-chronicles-one-haventon-born

Two years ago, David discovered the existence of vampires when his favorite sister fell victim to one. He's been hunting them in his home town of Haventon ever since.

Now, as yet another tragedy strikes his family and a botched hunt reveals him to one of his targets, the last thing he needs is responsibility for Anna - a novice hunter who attacked a human by mistake.

To make matters worse, it soon becomes apparent that Anna struck closer to a vampire than anyone realised and her error has attracted dangerous attention.

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Alana Lahay looks like your regular 20 year old yet she's not. She's a vampire princess with a lust for blood. When her kingdom's dark witches decide to attack, only one person can fight back-the princess herself. But to win the war she's going to have to team up with the most unlikely ally-humans. Ryder Landry may be the most feared warrior in the kingdom, but compared to Alana he might as well be the weakest.

I know its like vampire stuff but it falls under the teen fiction category too

http://www.wattpad.com/3926724-queen-of-the-vampires-the-fight-chapter-1-we-call

if you've read it leave some critism under it if you think i can improve.ty in advance

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Bailey has been trained ever since she was a little girl to slay vampires to keep the innocent safe. It has always been that way, ever since she was abandoned by her mother. Though when she discovers a terrible secret about her family secret that then forces onto herself will she be able to stay alive in this cut-throat world of vamp slaying or will she fall under pressure and let her little secret out?

I think you might like it, it's different to anything I've read and there's a bit of action in it too as well as some teen fiction type things such as love and stuff. Unfortunately it's not finished but nearly there!

I hope you like it!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/962850-not-always-a-one-sided-story

Saffron Is a girl in hiding, Running from her abusive , drug dealing family; searching for a brighter future... Ky Is a Vampire running from his past life ; Using the excuse that he is running from "Social servises" When both worlds colide the only choice is to run together. But as they fall in love more and more ; Ky's past unravels and a dark sincere side is shown

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Unman if you care to read mine it's call 'Forever Yours... To Torture' I don't know what it goes under but it's about vampires so... yep

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Unman was spellcheck...

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Hey there thunderheart! I'm a hardcore reader when it comes to books pertaining to vampires, just like you, I guess :) @thunderheart15

I have a story I just uploaded today with a pretty long and cheesy title: The Secret Life of an American Vampire

yeah, It doesn't seem to be too appealing but I promise you it will turn out to be original and great with a balance of vampires, action, romance, and drama!

Just read up to chapter two, and I promise you it'll get good!

Thanks so much there!

http://www.wattpad.com/4060271-the-secret-life-of-an-american-vampire-prologue

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1216443-all-hell-broke-loose

What if the gods, were to dangle the gift of power right infront of your eyes. What if the power was put into a girl? And to achieve this power, you must drain her until nothing is left. Vampires have looked for this Source. But never actually laid eyes on her. Well all that changes; when Mitch, a vampire, stumbles upon her. And all hell broke loose.

-Why you should read? Um well, I really want to know if I should continue it. And it's only two parts so it will be a really quick read, no joke. I would really appreciate it

@thunderheart15

oh and a book to recommend that's not mind. The Not So Secret Life of Helena Callahan

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Illusion...

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1208901-illusion

Vampire not by choise, nameless and 'saved' by another vampire. Illusion is about a girl who has no history simply can not remember any think before her change, not knowing her name is enought to drive her crazy, after all who forgets there own name? A story for you to enjoy.

Enjoy.

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You may like mine if you enjoy your vampires more monstrous. As to why you should read, I've received several comments praising the story's originality, which it sounds like is exactly what you are looking for.

I've included the cover, teaser and link below.

Story: Bleeder

Genre: Horror/Vampire/YA

Rated: PG-13

http://www.wattpad.com/3024545-bleeder-chapter-1-an-uncle-i-didn%27t-have

What if everything you knew about your life was a lie? What if the truth was much, much worse?

Mildred "Mills" Millhatten's life changed forever the day she found out it wasn't hers at all.

Forfeited as retribution for the alleged crimes of a father she's never met, she's cast into a strange, vicious world that she didn't know existed and has little hope of understanding.

As a Bleeder - one whose lifeblood feeds the Nosferatu - her continued survival hangs ever in the balance. The creatures are keeping her alive because they believe her blood has mystical properties. Mills fears what will happen when they realize they are wrong - or are they?

If she hopes to survive and discover who she truly is, she needs an ally. She needs to befriend a bloodthirsty monster. Because she lives in their world now, and if she doesn't do something fast, she's going to die in it too.

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@thunderheart15 wel to strt wid its not my story its a frnd's... i m not a reader but i enjoy reading it.... most ppl think dat jst bcoz its a fan fic it vl b abt da same n boring characters but it has nothing to do wid dem in da frst secnd or last place.... its an original plot wid an original characters.... i dont know if u vl believe me but i know u vl believe urself so jst check out a single chap n if u dont lyk it den ur coice...thnx for reading dis

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1011862-an-extention-to-twilight

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Well, to "justify" my story, I'd say that it's interesting. It's a vampire story, but it isn't your Twilight or those vampire romances. My story has the classic vampire (slight twist is possible) and involves hunters. All of this is set in the 1800s. It revolves around a girl, a prophecy, and a war that's been going on for ages.

I'm not very good at explaining my story so it's appealing, to be quite honest, so I'm sorry for the poor job. I hope you like it and if you don't, well I don't mind. Thanks either way.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1215103-otherworldly

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hey there, I'm kinda new at this whole wattpad thing and new at writing in general, i was hoping that you could check my story out, you know to get more reads? that way more people would comment, I NEED to get a good dose of criticism or else i won't learn. by the way, feel free to comment, just be honest, i can take it. XD

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1112216-blood-lust

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@thunderheart15

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Synopsis: He was dangerously alluring, eerily captivating, and had a wicked past. He was all things I should have stayed away from…yet I couldn’t get enough of. Fallon, seventeen and grudgingly hanging onto the bitter memories of her mother’s death, she can’t seem to move on and branch out. She soon loses all her friends over the years, and managed to cling onto one friend and only friend—Jenna. She has really become a social introvert, and really can only take pleasure in photography. Then one faithful—or more so fatal day she encounters a strange boy who has an electric pull towards him. Can Fallon avoid the temptation to get closer to this boy, or will she run and hide like she always does

Linky: http://www.wattpad.com/3008707-temptation-watty-awards-2012-chapter-one

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@thunderheart15 Try my two vampire stories. Their original and not cliche. I hope that you do like it. The summary I post should help justify for you.

http://www.wattpad.com/3185716-academy-of-night-prologue

Stefan Weckström, an eighteen almost nineteen year old from Hanko, Finland witnesses his family and the entire Finland members of his race be murdered by the group going around to all the countries in the world destroying vampire covens.

Stefan is unaware of what he is and is taken to America by his mother's friend Jacqueline. He goes to the Academy Of Night and learns more about himself and his race. Sylvia the daughter of the leaders of the American council helps him learn about himself.

The American's are getting ready to fight back, Stefan is their key to unlocking the mystery of how the group does what they do. He just needs to figure out exactly what it is that will bring them down.

and

http://www.wattpad.com/2332517-future-vampire-prince-prologue

Matthew Crawford. A human who is fostered by one of the rich families in California, that has hopes he will be the soul mate, the princess of California is looking for. Matt faces the tough challenge of adapting to the rich lifestyle but also if he is chosen by Nina to be her mate, his life with forever be changed with danger. He will face to other unfriendly states who will stop at nothing to stop California from finding their new King.

Thanks

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@thunderheart15

"A wonderful twist on the Vampire Romance teen fiction we read today" --@KayLaSen (*who I recommend for concrete, helpful, and honest critiques)

Easy Virtue; Romance / Vampire / Thriller

Henna never had a second thought about where her life would get her. It was simple enough to foretell really, since drugs and cigarettes never got anyone too far… but it’s enough for her. She’s got her boyfriend, Tye, to revel in the ‘easy life’ with after all. But what happens when things take a turn for the worst. In the blink of an eye, bliss is stripped from Henna and she finds herself struggling to face the problems she’s smoked too many cigarettes to escape. Little does she know that her own problems are only the beginning of something much, much bigger than her. What would you do when faced with dilemmas beyond your control, beyond your comprehension, and beyond your own world?

Full Review: http://kaylasen.blogspot.com/2012/02/easy-virtue-review.html

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@thunderheart15

http://www.wattpad.com/3701575-callie-an-enchantress-novel-book-1-watty-awards

There hasn't been one like her for 1500 years. For Callie it's survival. For everyone else it's love at first bite.

Callie Williams along with her identical twin sister suffered abuse from an uncle since the age of eight. We join them three years after they finally kick him out of their lives when Callie is accidentally stabbed and turned in to something she thought was myth and a figment of an overactive imagination.

Join her in her fight to save her new soul mate and the new society she has become part of from demons and a master vampire intent on controling her. With a little help from a few witches, shape shifters and a bit of luck can she actually get a little normality in her 'un-life'?

Everybody loves her. They just can't help themselves.

A dark beginning leads into a new twist on the vampire genre. This is not a romance but a young girls survival.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1158834-the-vampire-secret A forgotten vampire prophecy suddenly comes back to life when a 14 year old girl is born. Taiga Paige, an average New Yorker, goes on a school trip thinking it is just a common field trip all around the world. She thinks this will be the time of her life until her parents break the news to her right before she has to go. she is a vampire Suddenly, the trip is turned into a nightmare when she finds out she's not just a vampire either; she's the Goddess of the prophecy. Her three month trip now turns into a quest to find her true self, as well as save the world from total destruction along with another dimension she never knew existed. Can this teenager possibly survive?

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I'm doing it all! Fanning, voting if i like it, an commenting! Just do it first! I"m reading all stories, the whole thing. If it is super long i'll do it in sections. Mine is only 3 chapters about 5 pages. It is a vampire romance, still in the making! http://www.wattpad.com/4189495-the-wanderer Comment on my page please to let me know! http://www.wattpad.com/4189495-the-wanderer

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@thunderheart15 Hello there, My story is bout Zelman the most powerful and the most dangerous Vampire of his kind, and Willa an Orphan who is taken by Zelman, and married against her will, why? its rare for vampires to just take any human girl, why Willa? what is so special about her? Zelman hates her cuz he has no heart that beats in his chest, no feelings that he should feel for the poor Orphan.

The story contains Vampires, Lycan's, Witches, Demons. hope u enjoy reading it , Thank you ~.^

http://www.wattpad.com/2659325-prince-of-darkness-%E2%97%A3_%E2%97%A2-watty-awards-2012-prince-of

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