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  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago

    It's always nice when one receives a blanket comment. It adds numbers and hey at least they posted SOMETHING. But do you ever tire of posts that are seen all the time? Or how about having your story ACTUALLY read and not just glanced over? Well, you're in luck. For a limited time only, I'll be giving your story an honest read. Not just the first chapter like some---the whole kit and kabootal; be it three chapters or twenty five. AND I'll leave a legit comment on every chapter. ACT NOW and receive a BONUS summary of my view of your work when you say "Logorrhea". This is a time sensitive offer. Currently valid till the end of Passover/Easter or while free time last! Hurry while you still can.

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    Ahem, attention please! The cap had been place, the offer is hereby postponed! All posts made prior to April 6, 2012 are still valid. But posts there after have a minimum wait of three days. Thank you all for curing my boredom :) you're awesome!

  • _bl4kr0z3
    _bl4kr0z3
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope Hi hi so I was hoping if you could read my story it's a student teacher romance called safe haven

    http://www.wattpad.com/story/1007873-safe-haven-studentxteacher

    And what does logorrhea mean XD

    Thank you ahead of time

  • seeMISARCHIST
    seeMISARCHIST
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea? I googled it and lol'd. Well done. xD Thank you if you decide to take the time to read my story.

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    "As the younger brother to the kingpin of a local gang, Matthias hates attracting attention. But when a confrontation with his brother gets violent and Matthias is forced to flee for his life, he runs into a woman whose sole purpose seems to be making him the most noticeable person in the entire world."

  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago

    @bl4kr0z3 Well I had a professor say it was a diarrhea of words :p. but Merrimack-Webster says : n. excessive and often incoherent talkativeness or wordiness.

  • _bl4kr0z3
    _bl4kr0z3
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope Oh lol I got it

  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago

    Currently reading yours. You have me hooked @bl4kr0z3

  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago

    @seeMISARCHIST I'll get working on your WIP by this late evening :)

  • Monkeygrl101
    Monkeygrl101
    2 years ago

    PLEASE READ MINE! my newest please, The Moon Never Cries

  • _bl4kr0z3
    _bl4kr0z3
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope I see and thank you for your comments but I was wondering what you meant in your coMment on chapter 2 the parallel part

  • Blayde
    Blayde
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope Did you say Logorrhea? LOL

    New Girl in School

    When Kayla moves to a small town, she finds it difficult to fit in. Scorned and ridiculed, she won't give in to the self-righteous girls expecting her to dress like them. Her only friend is in her first-period class, but he's a boy.

    http://www.wattpad.com/3885540-new-girl-in-school

  • FragileGravity
    FragileGravity
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea! Haha learned a new word :) If you could take a look at my story "Hyde: The Monster Within" any and all helpful comments would much appreciated!

    http://www.wattpad.com/story/1144289-hyde-the-monster-within

    Thanks!

  • Xx_Satchfire_xX
    Xx_Satchfire_xX
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea(: As of right now my story is only one chapter long and it's just an introduction. Thank you in advance! :) http://www.wattpad.com/3972894-cross-my-heart

  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago

    Paste a link, please @Monkeygrl101

  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago

    "this has been my routine since Mom left two years ago." or that's as i remember it @bl4kr0z3

  • _bl4kr0z3
    _bl4kr0z3
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope Oh I get what you're saying I wouldn't do that again I only did to round it out like the fathers routine was drinking and her routine was crying herself to sleep so going full circle

  • CassidayMoriarity
    CassidayMoriarity
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea - If you happen to like adventure,romance,vampire,werewolve stories then you just might like my story

    THE LAST LIGHT

    Arianna, along with her 4 best friends , were kidnapped at the age of 10 before they would have their first shift. Who captured them? Only their sworn enemys, vampires. nearly 7 years later their is some complications. Including a vampire who attacks Arianna maliciously not normal during feeding time. The result? Arianna is now mute. The question is will it last till she dies or will it be temporary? This is her journey to escape along with the rest of the werewolves, and still live to tell about it Thats the summary ^ ^ ^ ^ I know its not very luring but I personally think the prolouge does the job.

    I continued to run through the dim streets screaming at the top of my lungs "HELP!" . I saw some lights turn on, but then immedietly flicker off. His chucklke was not far behind me less than a yard. I knew right then and there I was doomed. My legs buckled at the thought of never seeing my family and friends again. He wasn't expecting that and a hiss rang throug the air as he gracefully leaped over my head dodging my body by mere inches. "Please.. Please.. Dont hurt me..." and with that my body collapsed and went limp. I could feel the vibrations of his feet slowly making their way over to me. Something hard hit my head at fullforce. I didn't even have time to cry-out. It was all black in an instant.

    http://www.wattpad.com/story/1127331-the-last-light ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ That is the link to The Last Light

    For those people who want the mobile number for somereason here it is:

    3854069

  • RaeOfHope
    RaeOfHope
    2 years ago
  • huntergirl032717
    huntergirl032717
    2 years ago

    http://www.wattpad.com/user/huntergirl032717 Hey I currently have two different stories posted right now. One is a book of poems, and the other is a novel. The novel is called The Cellar. It's about a girl who is kidnapped, raped, but then she escapes. It's kind of explicit in terms of language but not too detailed in the rape scenes. Thanks if you can read it, and I understand if you don't.

  • Micizzle
    Micizzle
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea. It's only one chapter (I'd like critique on my premise) and it's an extension of Romeo and Juliet. Yeah... It sorta sounds weird when I say it so you'll just have to read to get it...

  • ebonylight01
    ebonylight01
    2 years ago
  • StrickenAurora
    StrickenAurora
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea. Lol niice choice of word.

    Passion:

    It all happened unexpectedly- to say the least.- he was doing his job, and her? Well let's say she got herself into some... trouble. Her selfish attitude affects those around her in negative ways. Especially Danny, who has to deal with her constantly. They both have strange pasts. Pasts that they hide away from eachother because they feel it's showing a weakness.

    Ellie is special in her own way, and because of that she has demons- or more commonly called as Eclipse's- after her, in search of her power.

    She has to start growing up, and fast, because if someone, or something gets a hold of her power, then everyone's screwed.

    Yet because life is never easy...

    Fate chooses the most careless, selfish person to be targeted... Ellie-

    http://www.wattpad.com/story/832192-passion

  • RestoringFandom
    RestoringFandom
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope @StrickenAurora @ebonylight01 @Micizzle @huntergirl032717 @CassidayMoriarity @bl4kr0z3 @Xx_Satchfire_xX @lchisholm @Blayde @Monkeygrl101 @seeMISARCHIST imagine that you've been living a life full of lies and you don't know what's real and what's fake. you're so confused that you want to end your life. 15 year old Gracie Brettson, has something no one knows about her not even her family. She was living a perfectly normal life, until a tragic accident had occurred. first time to a public school, one blurt out of her mouth and now she lies lifeless dying on her death bed will the love of her life be able to save her? http://www.wattpad.com/story/960159-sudden-jump

  • _lilkolo91
    _lilkolo91
    2 years ago

    @RaeOfHope Logorrhea If you still have time, I would like for you to check out my story as well. thank you for doing this, also, I've added your assassin story to my library and I will be reading it because it seems interesting and I love assassins! :)

    well here's mine. I hope you enjoy. ;) http://www.wattpad.com/story/752224-souls-of-faram-the-queen_vol-1-unedited

  • banjokazipper
    banjokazipper
    2 years ago

    http://www.wattpad.com/3987427-tears-of-ivory

    It's short enough for you, I have only posted the first chapter :) Logorrhea

    Happy Easter and thanks in advance!

  • Novelty
    Novelty
    2 years ago

    Logorrhea ^ what? XD I'm going to search it up. :b

    http://www.wattpad.com/4000911-i-don%27t-believe

    It's just a short prologue, not even a page long. c:

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