Honest Critiques Needed! Only three pages so far!

hey this story is only three pages so far but i want some honest critiques so i know what to do :) I know this chapter doesnt have a lot to do with vampires, but the story will later.

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@kodykatt whats the story called? I try and check it out :)

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@emmyx13 stone bruised its on my page. sorry i thought i posted the link :)

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bump

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http://www.wattpad.com/3514020-stone-bruised this is the link to the story

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@kodykatt

Hi! Sorry but you can't advertise in this club, so I'm going to remove your thread. If you want to promote then please head over to the Share Your Story Club. You could always check out the critique club too

Thanks :)

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