Have FEW chapters/ short stories? Come Here :))

Yeah, so I have this story called "Love and Death II : Remember Me, Please" So it's the second part of my first 'book' and I really need feedback on it. It's only a page.

Feel free to post your stories. I'll read them as soon as I can, comment and everything. Specially the ones with only a page or a prologue in it :)

here's my link :http://www.wattpad.com/3452099-love-and-death-ii-remember-me-please

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anyone?? :/ I'm bored. I've got nothing to do.

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bump

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Title: The Russian Dawnstars Genre: Adventure/ Thriller Summary: Maria Roberts is a perfectly ordinary girl with a hot boyfriend, a girl who wants to steal him away and a nightmare about a pair of twin murderers. When she sees the man from her dream at the school gates, she begins to realize that her nightmare might be more of a memory... Link:http://www.wattpad.com/3241099-the-russian-dawnstars-prologue

Title: The Elemental Chronicles- Book 1- The Nation Charmer Genre: Fantasy/ Adventure Summary: Dahlia McLean, her best friend, Troy and his sister Helen suddenly find themselves in a fight with a monster which has no right to exist outside of a fairytale. A short while later, they are whisked away to a place where people of their 'type' are. Apparently, they are descended from magicians and can control the elements not to mention that a particular magician wants to kill them... Link:http://www.wattpad.com/3147781-the-elemental-chronicles-book-1-the-nation-charmer

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Hope you'll read mine~! XD

http://www.wattpad.com/3484235-kissing-grey-chapter-1

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@jaggersmith Just read and commented on yours!
I've barely started either of my books... And the first one, Love of Humanity, has a really short prologue. I'd be forever grateful if you gave either or both of them a read+review :)

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Mines only 6 chapters. Thanks! :D

http://www.wattpad.com/3316703-opposites-attract-prologue

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going to check out your stories! (: #BRB

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anymore? :)

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One page each :)

Define Palestine: A land without people. Define Palestiniand: A people without land.

http://www.wattpad.com/3037318-a-people

War ? *Snort* War is beauty.

http://www.wattpad.com/2316451-havoc-the-plague-that-killed-us-all

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bump! I'm bored. Got nothin' to do.

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Heeeyyy :]

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Naïve

Summary: Michelle, the girl nobody really, truly knows. All they might remember is her wild, crazy, party-hard animal lifestyle, or her sweet, gentle, caring nature. But she isn’t both . . . is she? After an insane, spicy night with her brother’s best friend that she doesn’t remember, Michelle begins to realize that her split personality is destroying her life. Can she rely on her brother for support - who has cast her aside because of her incident with his best friend, Jake? Or will she find that life has become too much to handle, and find another way to cope - even if it takes a trip to hell and back?

Genres: Romance & Teen Fiction.

http://www.wattpad.com/2816251-na%C3%AFve

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@jaggersmith these are the first stories that i have written, and i would love it if you’d give me feedback. become a fan, promote this, or add it to your library, etc. that’s up to you. thanks in advance. :)

I HOPE YOU LIKE MY STORIES. :D

-sweetsecrets

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the first one only has 4 chapters and 2 are under construction. :| the second one has only 1 chapter and is completed. :)

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@sweetsecrets @chellex3ftw sure I'll check it out, please do the same for me. :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/3420011-fight-for-you-chapter-1-los-angles It's only three chapters. Thanks! (:

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http://www.wattpad.com/3490143-remember

"What if I were to tell you how this story is going to end? Would you read on? What if I were to tell you what the biggest tragedy in my life was? Would you care? If I were to flood you with useless information about who I am and what I do, would you remember any of it for more than five minutes?"

A short story about painful memories and a kiss.

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