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Rules!

Please be nice, and patient!

If I don't get to your request in three weeks or more; it means that I didn't want to get to it. I am sorry!

I will only add you to your cue if you include the password, located on this post.

I don't want anyone to be disappointed, but I am busy, so I might be distracted and write a crappy critic. If you do want a new critique, please PM me, and I will do it again!.

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FORM

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♥♥♥ Link ♥♥♥

♥♥♥ Short Summary ♥♥♥

♥♥♥ Genre ♥♥♥

:) Last Thing is the QUE!

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@supahfan11

♥♥♥ Title ♥♥♥ Captive Angel

♥♥♥ Link ♥♥♥ http://www.wattpad.com/2510761-captive-angel

♥♥♥ Short Summary ♥♥♥

I use a video, hope it doesn't matter:

Killer Kolas!

♥♥♥ Genre ♥♥♥ Horror& Romance

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@NightmareAngel :D You'll be on the QUE right now!

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BUMP!

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1. High Stakes

2. http://www.wattpad.com/3113186-high-stakes-celeste%27s-p-o-v

3. The stakes are high, but the cost of losing is even higher.

It is the 60th Hunger Games. The age of eligibility has been lowered, and District 13 has been brought back. Celeste Middleton and Jadee Haileigh are two completely different girls from different Districts. But when they are thrust together during this terrible event, what will be the result?

(Co-written with Sunshine-Lollypop. I write as Celeste, she writes as Jadee.)

4. Fan-Fiction

Killer Koalas!

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@supahfan11

HIIIIIII!!!

please read stories are on my profile page.which ever one is fine but i would apprciate the more you read.. please enjoy and thanks ahead of time...

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@1silverfeather I will try, but probably NOT! You did not follow the rules, so I might have to decline your request. I'll try though.

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@supahfan11 what rules???

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@1silverfeather Um, they were posted up, Post #2? The one with the colored font? ;)

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@supahfan11 OHHHHHH!!! oops. i thought that was what somebody posted.. sorry for wasting your time!!!

thx!!

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@1silverfeather Hehe, thats okay with me! :) I understand.

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@supahfan11

so sorry

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title - tough love and a tougher life OR life's surprises link - http://www.wattpad.com/1795920-tough-love-and-a-tougher-life-from-the-beginning AND http://www.wattpad.com/1797429-life%27s-surprises-introductions short summary - 1. After a girl's mother dies, the family is shaken terribly. Her relationship with her father slowy deteriorates as he starts to beat her. But don't fear, there are people ready to help like the guidance counsellor. The most unlikely begin to help her as she starts to unravel an old scarred lady's past. Sometimes learning about another's past can help in your future. 2. On your sixteen birthday it definitely isnt every girl's dream to find out a secret that there family has been keeping for a while and some bad news regarding this secret. The immediate reaction may be to take off and find out some answers. That is exactly what Cordelia van Laurent does in the story about learning about the past, dealing with the present and deciding about the future. Things seem to get harder when a boy is added to the equation

*****KILLER KOALAS*******

genre 1.romance teen fiction 2. romance teen fiction

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@kit13kat I will start right away! You Know? theres really no need for a cue.. :) Sorry, my mind speaking then! I'll get to it tomorrow, as I'm quite busy.

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Thank you so much means a lot to have another writer's opinion on my work :) I'll be sure to check out some of your stuff tomorrow too

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@kit13kat Thanks! I'd appreciate if you checked my original works. :D I'd like that a ton!

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@supahfan11 Killer Koalas

The Beasts of Winter

http://www.wattpad.com/3006371-the-beasts-of-winter

Nieve was only nine when her life changed. When the Beasts began to eat at her soul. They say that Angels add to your soul, where the Beasts eat it away. But Nieve has had more than her fair share of Beasts. Will the Beasts eat down to the very base core of her heart, or will she save herself? But Nieve can't do it alone, and with two lovers to help her, she will be far from alone. Join Nieve in a tale of love, desperation and adventure. Watch as she defeats The Beasts that eat at her soul, and as she fills the empty holes in her soul. Read it now! ~~~~~ Winter killed my father. They took him away from me. The Beasts of winter killed my father. ~~~~~

Adventure (#83) and Romance (#848)

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Teen Fiction, Roamnce

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@supahfan11 Hello, Are you interested in being a professional reviewer for editorsUNITE or perhaps find a reviewer for your own stories? editorsUNITE is an account made to help Wattpadders find editors, co-writers , story reviewers and beta readers. Along with these services we also have Story of the Week and Contest. if you are interested in being or getting an reviewer; don’t hesitate to check out our profile and newsletter which can give you more information.

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@editorsUNITE Hi! I'd love to be a reviewer. I'll drop by and place a comment. xD sounds like fun! :)

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@supahfan11 Okay Thank you.

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@supahfan11 Hey there! :D I know you've already critiqued one of my stories, but I was wondering if you'd mind critiquing the other one.

Title: Otherwise Engaged

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/3199203-otherwise-engaged

I don't really have a summary... genre is romance

Killer Koalas

thankyou:)

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@TwiceTheCharm Of course!

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