Professional Critiquing by the WattyCreates Team! OPEN

woops, stupid fatal errors xD

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okay, hard :) i'm ready to take in the criticism x)

TITLE: Forever and Always: Melting Her Frozen Heart LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/3530896-forever-and-always-melting-her-frozen-heart

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@WattyCreates Level: Medium and thank you so much! :D

http://www.wattpad.com/2598044-becoming-a-lyric-unedited-becoming-a-lyric

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It's not finished I just want to see if it's good enough to continue and I would like it Hard please! http://www.wattpad.com/3416452-reborn-prologue

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I'll critique it! Would you like it easy, medium or hard? @sentimental_dreamer

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Medium http://www.wattpad.com/2911635-and-you-thought-it-stopped-at-love-triangles

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Level: Medium http://www.wattpad.com/3233111-war-songs-dooms_day if you could critique the three poems in that book :) Thanks.

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Title: Reverie

http://www.wattpad.com/3588622-reverie

As for level I'd say... hmm... how about a medium for now and when I post a new chapter and I'm feeling bold, I could go for hard.

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I would like a "hard" critique on this: http://www.wattpad.com/3571382-facades-chapter-1

Thanks :D

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@WattyCreates Level: Medium

Thank you!!

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HELLO!!!! I just wanted to say no one is critiquing mine... its on page 6, the title is Against. Thank you.

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http://www.wattpad.com/3196109-secret-witch-discovery-under-editing-by-skybluez medium please :P :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/3607425-pyromania I would like a "medium" critique on this. Thank you!!

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Level brutally hard, please!

As an overambitious high school senior, I was touring the school of my dreams: Yale University. If I went to a place like this, I could only imagine a brilliant future ahead.

Call it a coincidence, fate, destiny—whatever—but being the good Samaritan I was, I thwarted one student's ill-planned suicide attempt. I saved Darren.

I should have felt good, right? Like the world was all rainbows and sunshine since I did a good deed? Sadly, life didn't work that way for me.

Maybe the mental stress of almost shooting himself was what turned Darren into a basket case. This guy started stalking me, and the worst part was . . . I liked it.

http://www.wattpad.com/3578375-stray-author%27s-note

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Hard, please :))) It's more of a start than anything though. I'd love some harsh feedback on it! http://www.wattpad.com/3592570-thanatophobia-fear-of-dying-a-b-c-d-please-don%27t t

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Title:Fill My Heart romance/teen fiction

A famous pop star actually has a desperate death wish despite his positve appearane and talent. When he is about to commit suicide an ordinary girl, unknowing that he is the famous pop star convinces him otherwise. the pop star falls in love with the girl, but the girl, not knowing it was him she saved, does not want to accept his love. she is a very serious down to earth stoic character. a boy who needs love is teaching a girl who cannot love how to love

only the prologue is up at the moment...

I ALSO NEED A CoVEr LEt me know if you can help me out...

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@strawberrycrayon how do you do that banner thing

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Its genres are fantasy and adventure. You think each fantasy story is the same? You're far from the truth. This is a dark and edgy fantasy. Level: Haaaard!

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I’d really love some constructive criticism on my story! Level:hard critique :P

It’s called Someone Hunted and here is the prologue: Why her? They were very specific, they didn’t hunt just anyone. When they took flight, it was for a purpose. And one thing was for sure, they had their minds set on this girl, whoever she was. I knew without a doubt that she was someone special, someone worth saving, someone hunted.

I have only posted 2 chapters so far, any thoughts and feedback are welcome :D

Link to my story: http://www.wattpad.com/3320971-someone-hunted-prologue

<3 Elise

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@WattyCreates OOOEEE nice! Hey, you may want to consider contacting @HiddenFantasySciFi, about linking up or something :) They're starting a Real (W)riters Revolution over there :)

Title: Dragon's Tooth

Level: HARD! lol

Link:http://www.wattpad.com/3591677-dragon%27s-tooth-new-version

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@LoveStorm Well, I make the images myself and then put it in the message boards with HTML codes.

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@strawberrycrayon thanks

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Oh, oh, I love me some critique.

Level: Harder the better

http://www.wattpad.com/3608301-the-longest-lament-prologue-1

“A grizzled soldier at war with peace. A powerful wizard buried beneath the weight of failure. A street child with a knack for language, illusion, and mischief.A nobleman’s daughter unable to ignore the injustice all around.Two countries at war, twin sides of the same coin, each thirsting only for the taste of total victory.And between them all the magic, the runenotes, the spell song, the Great Song.The Longest Lament.”

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Level: Medium

http://www.wattpad.com/3521807-close-enough-to-hurt

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@WattyCreates could you critique my story?

level: hard (please don't focus on my spelling/grammar errors)

http://www.wattpad.com/3630655-crown-of-fate-the-many-destinies-of-aldrik-nocton

thank you :))

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