Fireworks

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A/N: Hey everyone! This is another one of my failed attempts at writing a poem. It's not very good, but anyways, I'd really appreciate it if you read it and tell me what you thought of it. And any suggestions on how I can improve are more than welcome :) Thanks for reading :D

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Night creeps up

Dark enfolds around

The moon shines

The stars shimmer


It's all quiet

Not a sound in the air

Everyone and everything is waiting

Waiting for the colours


Suddenly, a bang

And colours shoot up

Sound fills the air

Mingled in with the explosions


Red, blue, green

Purple, white, orange

Colours of the rainbow

Shoot all across the sky


Shooting across the shining moon

Shooting across the shimmering stars

The world comes alive

As the fireworks fill the skies.

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A/N: Well, if you've read it, i'm so happy :) Now that you've done me the huge favour of reading it, could you please do me a tiny little favour of telling me what you thought of it? Thanks :D

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