Heyyyyyyyy this is my first story. I had help from my friends, so don't bite. Plzzzzzz vote and comment and tell me whether it was good, or if it needs improvement. I would appreciate it
"O.M.G!!! Did he seriously ask you out?" I jumped a little startled by her little outburst. "yes Gabi, he did now stop freaking screaming my info to the world." I barked. She just rolled her eyes. "fine miss bossy pants." was all she said. I opened my laptop and logged on to Facebook. When I logged in, I got a call from my friend stacy. This is how it went.
Stacy: "oh thank god Becca someone's in the house!!"
I realized she was whispering.
Me: "Stacy are you ok?"
Stacy: "no... No...the guy bit me a- and I ran away. I'm hiding from- oh god he's in he-" and the line went dead.
I put the phone down getting off Gabi's bed and started pacing. "Gabi I think Stacy is in trouble." she looks up at me worried. "what do you mean?" I stopped and ran out the hallway, down the steps. "come on!!"
~~ 15 minutes later~~
I ran into Stacy's house. "Stacy??? Where are you???" I heard a thump upstairs. "I'm coming upstairs!!" I went upstairs and into her room. She wasn't in there. I went into the bathroom, and she wasn't there either, but I did see blood. "Gabi look in her parents room." she nodded and ran to a room at the end of the hall. I kept investigating the bathroom, seeing if there any trail anywhere,Magen I hear a scream. I shot up and ran to where Gabi was, seeing that she was frozen in place. I looked in her direction to see someone standing over Stacy. I saw a blood puddle surrounding Stacy's body, and I hadn't realized that the person that was standing in front of Stacy, was now heading in our direction. I was frozen there too.
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