THIS IS MY FIRST ONE SHOT/FANFIC. Feed back please? (During the brief texts betwee Lou and Harry, Louis is italics ad Harry is bold. Also, I love Eleanor. I am not trying to be rude by ot having Louis date her J) Also, if this sucked as much as i think it did, then i won't write a lot. WARNING: SMUT! Leave suggestions below and, yeah :) enjoy? xx PS I wrote this at 2:30 am, so if it makes no sense, i am sorry :( I didn't know what to write about, but if you have a promt, feel free :) Also, if this is kind of like a story you did, i am sorry but i usually read the fics, not write them. :)
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*Harry’s POV*
“But it is so hot in here Liam!” Niall was shouting and complaining about the heat. I wouldn’t blame him. It was boiling in me and Lou’s flat.
“I know Niall. Don’t you think we are trying to fix the air? Zayn, come help me and stop looking at yourself in the mirror!” Liam was getting angrier, while I saw Niall looking to eat and Louis staring at me. He was sitting across from me. The other boys seemed preoccupied, except for Louis. He whipped out his phone and started to type something. He looked up and gave a devilish smile until my phone buzzed and I knew it was Louis. I looked at it and my eyes widened.
I am so hot. I just want to peel off my clothes and let my cock breathe. Maybe you could help me out tonight?
I was so turned on. Louis hadn’t been ‘dirty’ for a while, now. Louis and I have been together since the x factor, and I haven’t been happier. The boys don’t exactly ‘know’ we are together, so we try to keep it on the down low. Louis always teases me in at night or when we are alone, but why now? Especially while the guys are here!
Louis! The boys are in here and I don’t need to get a boner in front of them. Please stop L
Aww, come on Harry! I thought you wanted me to change it up a bit. Doing this in front of the boys makes it so much more exciting! Now I want you to think about me giving you that blow job tonight. Having me lick your shaft, and bob my head up and down. You want my amazing and warm mouth on you, don’t you?
When I got the text, I could start to feel the growing erection in my pants. I needed Louis to come and ease the urges I was having. I let out a small sigh as I saw him lick his lips. I threw a pillow over my shorts as I continued to grow.
Oh Boo, you’re making me so horny right now. Please can we go to the bathroom before the boys notice?
Fine. Only for you, Hazza. Meet me there in a few minutes ;)
As Louis got up from his seat, I noticed that Liam, Zayn, and Niall were sitting around the air conditioner wondering why it wouldn’t work. I waited a few minutes and told them that I was going to take a nap so they wouldn’t look for me. They didn’t seem to mind, or hear me. As I quickly saw the silent battle Zayn and Niall were having over Liam, I wasn’t too worried. I quickly ran to the bathroom while trying not to disturb the other boys. I walked in, and Louis was standing there naked. I pulled off my shirt and Louis crashed his lips on mine. I made sure I had locked the door and Louis was already struggling to pull of my shorts. I yanked them off and he reached into my boxers.
“God Hazza, you are so hard. I can’t believe I did that to you,” he said as he gave me a cheeky wink.
“Maybe it was Zayn,” I shot back sarcastically.
“Ha ha, very funny. Just get over here.”
As I went back for another kiss, Louis knelt down and pulled off my boxers and I could feel his hot breath on me. I let out a small whimper and he started to lick under my shaft. When he got to the head, he flicked his tongue off of it. I bit my lip as I held back my moans. His head bobbed back and forth and he sucked me like a pro. I couldn’t handle it.
“I’m gonna cum, Lou.” I couldn’t take it.
“Not yet. I don’t want you to cum like this.” He suddenly turned me around and stuck a finger in me.
”We don’t have time for a quick fuck, Lou,” I said quietly.
“Who says?” He shoved two more fingers and all I could do was let out a ‘please’. He aligned his cock to my entrance and shoved himself in. I gasped and he waited for me to get adjusted. I finally chocked out an ok when he started to thrust. I knew he wouldn’t last long. As he got deeper, he finally his the bunch of nerves that sent me over. I came all over the shower door. As Louis felt me tighten around his throbbing cock, he came deep inside of me. We stood there for a second, panting hard, and collected ourselves. We put our clothes on, and I quickly wiped up the mess.
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