Redeemer Romance

hello! I’m trying to write a story about two emos falling in love. if it sucks PUH-LEEZE tell me before I humiliate my self.. I’ll include pictures on the side thanks!!

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I was friendless at my stupid Prep-school, Redeemer. Yes I want to go to Yale, yes I got excepted, but I seriously hate the pressure of needing to be the best out of every one. No 17 year old needs, nor deserves, that kind of pressure.

My name is Marissa Blunt, and this is my story.

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Marissa POV::

            I was sitting in advanced chem. and Mr. Shope was droning on about something I’d already read ahead on. Then the bell rang, finally.

            When I walked out the door, I bumped into someone. Someone HOT. he had shaggy black hair and icy blue eyes. I stood there staring into his eyes when he finally let out a breath.

            “Hey,” he said. He stuck out his pale hand for me to shake. “I’m Tiler.”

            “I- I’m Marissa,” I stuttered. he was sooooooooooo hot. he was taller than me too. He laughed. my breath caught, he had a REALLY sexy laugh… and smile. I felt my face get hot.

            “Um.. maybe we should meet up after school,” he suggested, “There’s a diner over on 5th Street. maybe we could go there?”

            I was going to freak out!!!!!! Thee hottest guy at Redeemer just asked ME, Marissa Blunt, out on a date.. TONIGHT!!! “uhh… sure!” I replied, “pick me up at 5?” he nodded. I was going to pass out

            “well uh… I have to get to class and I’m taking it so do you… so I’ll pick you up at five. bye Marissa,” He smiled. I think I was having an OUT BODY EXPERIENCE!!!!! I walked like a zombie to Gym.

Tiler POV::

            as I walked into the boy’s locker room, I felt like a fucking zombie! Marissa was… really fucking pretty. she has long Blonde hair, and brown roots and tips, with icy blue eyes.. like mine. she was probably a foot shorter than me and was really thin. not anorexic thin but really tiny.

            “dude, what happened?” Erik has been my best friend for 6 years.

            “do you know who Marissa Blunt is???” I asked hoping he didn’t like her like I did.

            “the blonde freak who cuts herself?? yeah. everyone knows her… how come you didn’t??” as Erik told me this I knew this girl was perfect for me. why do you ask??

~She’s pretty

~she seems neglected

~she seems nice

~she’s emo too

            I had to talk to her again… before our date tonight.

NARRATOR: little do these soul mates know.. they are about to see each other… and become partners in a hands on gym activity. Keep in mind Marissa has been bullied a lot. where Tiler is at the top of the chain.

I’m sorry it’s so short I just really wanted to update this TODAY and I cant really think of anything else.

I NEED INSIRATION!!! comment with what you want to read about… nothing dirty or violent please!! unless its depression related.

**luv Annie**