SuperHero [Unavailable]

DO NOT GIVE ME PRAISE.

I do not want any comments telling me how much you like the story or telling me to "update soon". I want ONLY constructive criticism. If you feel you must give me praise, please also include some criticism along with it. If you give me comments such as "love it" "update soon" "awesome", I will delete them from here on out and ignore them. (I really do appreciate all the love from you all, but that's not why I'm posting my stories here.) If you absolutely need to praise it and can't find anything for me to improve, please message your comment to me rather than post on the story comments. Then I will take the comment to heart and respond to you. I want to make this the best story it can be, so please help me out.

Point out mistakes, weak points in the writing, and anywhere I can improve the story. I would much rather get a comment bashing and ripping apart the story than gushing of how much you liked it. I want constructive cricitism! Please be as harsh and mean as you can. I want to improve as a writer, and I want this story to be as brilliant as possible, so feel free to dish out your worst!

If the characterization is weak or contradictory in spots, plot holes, pacing is too fast or too slow, you can't visualize a scene very well, something that was meant to be funny wasn't or vice versa, I need to do more world building, grammar mistakes, typos, etc. PLEASE let me know and maybe a suggestion or two on how to make it better.

If something feels off to you, it probably is. Even if you can't figure out what, just mention it and I'll look back over it and try to improve upon it.