Hey! Well I wrote this a few years ago at age 12 I hope you guys all like it :) vote and comment, tell me what you think and help me become a better writer as I will do the same!
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I knew it all along that you would leave
Still throughout it all I wanted to believe,
That maybe you could stay
At least for me.
I don't understand
Sometimes I wish I could be in command
But, my life opposes.
Now it's all gone
In this life my family abandoned me,
And I still don't belong
No one seems to care so I let it be,
If you can see...
Please help me.
I am isolated in this world
Even with people everywhere,
People helping and trusting
Yet I see all but nothing,
I have no confidence
On what I'm becoming,
No comfort as I cry
No good-luck wish or a simple goodbye,
If you can see...
I just need someone to believe in me.
I've watched it rain
While the time ticked away,
I've say beside a window-sill
Staring into empty space,
I've watched while autumn came
All the leaves being raked away,
I've seen the snow
And witnessed the white specks purifying below,
If you can see...
Come be lonely with me.
I sit on the porch
Rocking back and forth; the sun blazing,
I smile watching kids playing
I peeked through the door,
Remembering when my family was there before.
I jumped to conclusions
But ended up adding more confusion,
If you can see...
I'd begin by asking you to make sense of me.
I climbed rapidly
From high in the trees,
I stared at the sky
Wondering what has become of my life,
If you can see...
Please comfort me.
The times past
I begin to speak to them by they ignore me,
And I'm scared to ask
My parents if they'll ever love me back.
Or maybe this is a delusion
A foreign territory, an intrusion!
But still, I'm hurting
Because maybe, No one will care for me.
If you can see...
I just want someone to love me.
I used to walk alone in the light
But now I desperately want a companion in the dark,
Everything's wrong it's never been right
I'm tired of being fake,
So please I'm begging
I don't want to break,
If you can see...
I don't want to make a mistake.
I hold my head in my hands
Please let this all end
I take my last breath
And hold on to it before my death
If you can see...
It's to late to help me.
-Savannah Jade 3/21/12
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