Please Help Me (poem)

Hey! Well I wrote this awhile back hope you guys all like it :) vote and comment, tell me what you think and help me become a better writer as I will do the same!

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I knew it all along that you would leave

Still throughout it all I wanted to believe,

That maybe you could stay

At least for me.

I don't understand

Sometimes I wish I could be in command

But, my life opposes.

Now it's all gone

In this life my family abandoned me,

And I still don't belong

No one seems to care so I let it be,

If you can see...

Please help me.

I am isolated in this world

Even with people everywhere,

People helping and trusting

Yet I see all but nothing,

I have no confidence

On what I'm becoming,

No comfort as I cry

No good-luck wish or a simple goodbye,

If you can see...

I just need someone to believe in me.

I've watched it rain

While the time ticked away,

I've say beside a window-sill

Staring into empty space,

I've watched while autumn came

All the leaves being raked away,

I've seen the snow

And witnessed the white specks purifying below,

If you can see...

Come be lonely with me.

I sit on the porch

Rocking back and forth; the sun blazing,

I smile watching kids playing

I peeked through the door,

Remembering when my family was there before.

I jumped to conclusions

But ended up adding more confusion,

If you can see...

I'd begin by asking you to make sense of me.

I climbed rapidly

From high in the trees,

I stared at the sky

Wondering what has become of my life,

If you can see...

Please comfort me.

The times past

I begin to speak to them by they ignore me,

And I'm scared to ask

My parents if they'll ever love me back.

Or maybe this is a delusion

A foreign territory, an intrusion!

But still, I'm hurting

Because maybe, No one will care for me.

If you can see...

I just want someone to love me.

I used to walk alone in the light

But now I desperately want a companion in the dark,

Everything's wrong it's never been right

I'm tired of being fake,

So please I'm begging

I don't want to break,

If you can see...

I don't want to make a mistake.

I hold my head in my hands

Please let this all end

I take my last breath

And hold on to it before my death

If you can see...

It's to late to help me.

-Savannah Jade 3/21/12

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