Never let you go [larry stylinson]

At my attempt this is chapter 1 :) tho I had some help ...;) comment below what u think .. I love to here peoples opinions! So here it goes...

Chapter 1  

Harry-

"Lou,can I come in?" I asked I hadn't seen him all week! He locked himself in his room and as far as I know he hasn't come out,let alone answer my texts,messages,and just plain standing out side his door.and I don't even know why he wont talk to me! "Lou,please talk to me!" I guess he was ready to talk because I heard footsteps then the door unlocked and opened showing a red eyed messy haired Louis. "What do you want Harry" he said annoyed I looked at him for a moment then spoke ,"why wont you talk to me,its been a week!" He looked at me then turned and walked to his bed and sat down 

"Lou please tell me why" I looked at him with hoping eyes and he looked deep into my eyes, took a deep breath and started."Harry you are my best mate,I wouldn't ever want that to change.lately I just don't know what to say." He looked up at me and I looked at him it seemed like forever till I broke the intense stare ."Harry? " he said I looked up "yes Lou?" I said as I looked away because I saw the tears fill his eyes."I'm sorry,I love you" I looked up at him and smiled "I love you to Lou" . We sat there and looked at eachother and started leaning in twards eachothers face. Our noses were touching,lips close I could feel his breath on my lips ...they got closer,and closer,and closer until they started to touch slighty. *knock knock* we both jumped at the sudden noise then the door opend. there stood Liam smiling he looked at us then said "boys we have to leave for a interview in 5 min hurry up, and Louis comb your hair!" He said then headed down stairs, leaving me and Lou alone.

Louis- 

We kissed!I kissed Harry! Even though It was I tiny peck, I kissed him! It felt right, Harry's lips aginst mine.I didn't tell him why I was upset before but it was only because of what happend last week. *flashback* we were sitting watching my favorite film, greese,when we out of the blue started to kiss and when the movie ended, I ran up to my bed room and locked the door.I didn't want to tell Harry I liked the kiss,I didn't even want to admit it to my self! So i sat in my room all week not wanting to talk to Harry. Untell he was standing at my door begging me to just talk to him I finally came through.* I did tell him I love him and I met it but I love him more than a brother ,at least I'm starting to. I just don't want to mess up our friendship .