Hola this is my second book!! I did not like my first book so I ended it. It has a very amazing ending!! JK it will probably make you laugh. Any ways I would like to say thanks to ma bff for helping me with all the names and that sahzzz and go read her books their awesome. So I want you to do something, it's not that hard. I want you to vote, comment, like, promote, and eat a jar of nutella( the last ones optional) so yeah do that now, it motivates me to write more and if I don't get alot then I will probably stop the book by chapter like 5 or something. I'm probably boring you to def so.....
ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Danielle<3
PS tell me if it sucks because I CAN handle criticism I actually like it to know that I'm not waisting my time.
"Heey Lia" I said sadly to my best friend.
She waved at me " The Doctor said your getting better every day!" She exclaimed cheerfully.
" Maybe I can fight this!" I said hopefully even though we both know that it wont go away.
Hi there let me introduce my self, my names Crimson MacEachran. I have the most wonderful family in the world. I live at the hospital and I have ever since I was 5 years old. My mom Cheyanne, my older sister, Charlotte, and my best friend Lia Sutherland have came to visit me here every day. I have cancer. Now I don't want any one to feel bad for me. I live my life feeling happy, I look at myself in the mirror every day and I see a girl who tries her hardest, hopes for the best and looks beautiful. I pray that I can live just one more year every night before I go to sleep.
I'm 5"9 when I stand up completely straight, I have chocolate brown eyes and I wear glasses. I lost all my hair when I started chemo.That was when I first got cancer. My back is covered in scares from all the attempts they made to get rid of the cancer but it would just come back a month later. Tomorrow I have to go for a new surgery that will hopefully work better.
"What do you want to do today?" Asked Lia her bright blue eyes sparkling with the same dream as mine. That one day I'll get better.
"Do you wanna sing?" I ask her thinking about the song we were just trying to write yesterday. When I get better we said that we were going to join a band and sing at the Gelotta Corina down the street from my house. They have open mike night every Tuesday night.
She takes out her guitar and her note book. We've been writing songs for six years now. She started playing guitar since she was 10 and I sang and made up songs since as long as I can remember.
We started to put our songs on youtube last year when we were16 and we got a lot of views but not enough to get discovered.
Lia took out a ponytail and wrapped it around her long red curly hair, and started to strum notes on her guitar. I started to hum and tap my fingers on the notebook. We worked on the song for about 3 hours until her mom called and she had to leave.
Even though I haven't been in school since I was 5 I'm still pretty smart. Lia teaches me everything that they learn and she brings me sheets and all that crap. She tests me on all of it and I've never failed so I guess that's pretty good.
Charlotte walks in with her hands behind her back."Guess what I have for you!" She pulls out a box of my favorite candy."Hows the most beautiful girl in Vancouver doing?" She says that every time she sees me.
I smile and laugh at her "Better than last night!!" I was sick to my stomach last night and couldn't sleep.
"The doctors said that you can leave to come and see my graduation in two weeks!!" I felt like jumping up and down I was so excited, but I fainted last time that happened.
"Oh my god really!!!! They never let me off the hospital grounds!!! I'm so happy!!" She came over and gave me a big hug. I was smiling so much.
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