Truths, and my pet peeves on watpad!

Ok my biggest pet peeve is how someone writes a story and you know when the girl and boy meet and they brush there shoulders, and stair dramingly in there eyeslike this I shall demonstrait!!!!!


"i was walking down the middle of school, and my eyes laid on the most beautiful person in the world. I started walking and I hit something. oMG it was him I stair into hiss eyes. And so does he"

That shit up there pisses me the hell off:-( in America if you ever did that the guy would think your insane and run away. Now if you did that to me I would bitch slap you for ever staring oh-so dreamingly into my eyes.

Pet peeve#2

When a girl gets kiddnapped, and they soon fall inlove, and he decides to send her back, because he thinks hes not good enough for her DEMONSTRATION!!!!!!!!!!

"i was on my way to a club when my car broke downso my idea was to get some gas. I walked over and I heard rustling in the bushes and out came this man, very muscular.he ran at me and stuffed something in my mouth the next day a beautiful guy came in and said I was his forever, and we got marryed and lived happily ever after"

DEMONSTRATION 2 when this happens in real world

"i was walking from the club and my car ran out of gas so my idea was to get some gas so I walked alongthe path when I heard rustling in the bushes, and a muscular man came out, and said hes going to rape me , after that he killd me, and threw me in a sewer." Morebpet peeves tommorow !!!!

Thats what happnes in america!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh and my truth for today is I secreatly like Ellie Gouldi.g I think shes cute:3