Vampire Stories:Revenge (On Hold)

Chapter 1

"authors blah blah section" XD

hello guys!!!!

after reading your stories here for....a week and something i decided to share my own stories too!

i know it's not that much of time but i've read somewhere around half  of the books with werewolves and two with vampires and i keep going!

actually i'm most the comic artist type...i don't usually write stories i illustrate them...

and this is one of my comic stories...

if i don't finish them here i'll give the link of the site that i'm trying to create where you 'll read it in an manga form! (if you don't know what manga is check it here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manga)

i have to say that i'm really sorry if there is any mistakes,if i'm writing something wrong or if my grammar isn't right please text me with the right form of it...

sorry guys but English isn't my native language!

i'll continue my blah blah section after the first chapter so have fan and don't get bored XDD

First Chapter

It was already dark.There weren't people outside because of the unexpected bad weather.I had just finished my training and I was returning home.Usually it wasn't so dark, since it was still the first days of September, but all those clouds had hide the last light of the sun.

I got down from the bus at a stop near my house.All I had to do now was just pass the Church's court, pass across the road after and I would be inside my lovely warm home.A strong wind hit my face and all the orange leaves of the trees around the church started their own dance in the sky as the wind made them fly.

There wasn't anyone around.Usually there were many teenage couples who made out in the benches near the church, guys who were drinking beers on the Church's stairs or kids who were playing football(soccer) around.There was only me, the trees,  the misty lights and the dancing leaves.

I walked deep in my thoughts while I was watching the scene around me when something woke me up.I heard a noise.Something like a rustle but I wasn't so sure.I looked careful around me.

Nothing.

I though I was imagining things so i continued walking.How wrong of me!

I understood my mistake when something or someone grabbed me roughly from behind.I wasn't really in the mood for dealing with some pervert guy so I just pushed him off me really hard. I left my athletic bag quickly down and turned to face the pervert one, ready to kick his ass.

And then I was shocked!

There was a middle aged man, somewhere near forty or fifty, in front me with shoulder-long blond dirty wet hair.He looked like he hadn't take a shower for months.And he had a really crazy look in his face!

I thought he might be drunk or maybe he had just use hard drugs or whatever.But not until I looked into his sharp teeth and his crazy red eyes!

You've got to be kidding me! He can't be a vampire! They exist only in my books, right? Maybe he is just a weirdo killer who loves to disguise like that before he kills his poor victims.

Either though wasn't good.

He started smiling like an idiot and attacked me again.I dodged him and stepped back, away from him.

Vampire or not that guy was really crazy and dangerous!

Even though the police station was close of the church I couldn't run there or call for help because that weirdo was attacking me all the time without letting me do a thing.All I could was to avoid his attacks and hit him sometimes back, which wasn't very easy.

He was so quick and strong.I could barely dodge him.And he didn't even look like he was using much power, unlike me, who was sweating all this time.He continued laughing like crazy all the time and that was pissing me of!

"Pretty pretty girl, and strong" he said smiling.Finally he talked! It seems like he does have a tongue after all.

"What the hell do you want?" I asked him madly.

"Oh and mad too!" he continued laughing.Oh I wanted so much to punch him!What the hell was wrong with that  old man?

"I like you very much"he said looking at me.Yeah, whatever but i don't like you.But i was feeling strange.It felt like his look passed through me.His crazy eyes with that devilish sparkle in them.Holly shit!

I froze immediately and I felt the hair on my back to rise up.I closed my eyes for a few seconds to concentrate.When I opened them he was gone, that wasn't normal for any human, we don't just vanished so quickly!

Then a pain started coming from my neck.

He bite me!

Really hard also!I couldn't believe it.What the hell was happening? And why can't I move? Damn it!

I felt his sharp fangs.I felt him sucking my blood from my body.Even though it was painful I didn't scream.And then the pain stopped and something new came up!

A new, different and unbearable pain, ten times worse than before.What the hell!

I was feeling like he was giving me something.Something new ran through my veins while it was burning my insides.My whole body was on fire!

I tried not to scream this time too but I couldn't stop it like before.It was like death!

I pushed him again.He let me and I fell on the ground.He was still smiling like crazy! And then vanished!

Poof!...Again!

My eyes started to blur, I couldn't see clearly.My last image was the one of the church and the red cross on its roof who faded slowly...

Then everything became all black!

 "authors blah blah section"again XDD

How was that???

ok don't tell me 'cause there's lot more!!!

This is actually my fifth story from Vampire Stories series...

But it doesn't matter 'cause each one is a different story>>.

which means that i have another four Vampire Stories to upload....and lot more!!!

I'm new and I don't really know how to use everything in the site but i'll learn sooner or later XD

see ya!!!!^^