Dear June!

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       Dear June,

I am Jaz'Mariee Dominique Marsala.I am also a self-proclaimed bipolar person. Due to this,my therapist has instructed me to keep a diary. In this diary, I am suppose to write my deepest,most intimate thoughts,hopes, dreams, wishes, and fantasies.

    To some, the things i say may be disturbing ,To others, amusing. But no one will see it anyway,so it doesn't really matter now does it? You will know all about the little voices in my head and the bad things they tell me to do.However, Its not ALWAYS bad things, since they've stopped me from harming others and myself plenty of times.

    I guess i should tell you a little about me now huh?

     Well, i am currently 15 years of age.I am 5'5 and have brown hair and brown eyes (very ordinary if you ask me).I have a very playful and random personality. I have a very short attention span and and even shorter temper.I don't have a favorite animal or color because it changes every day.

   One thing you really need to know about me. I wasn't always 'mentally disturbed' as my therapist likes to call it.That may confuse you a little,so let me clear it up.See,I was born blind! However, at age 10,I was given and eye transplant from a dead person,and that's when the problems started.

    See,what the doctor neglected to tell my mother and I, is the the person who's eyes i got, was a maniac.This man was crazy,bipolar,and delusional.

      At first,everything was OK,ya know? I was still adjusting to being able to see after 10 long years.Then,after about 2 months,i began having weird dreams.Then i began hearing thing.When all that stopped,i thought the worst part was over.Oh, how wrong was I.

WELL, this is chapter one.this is my first story ever and i don't know how it is.it may suck, so please comment and tell me what you think and what i can improve and work on.i would really appreciate it.And don't forget to vote since i want to put this in the watty awards!!!

Jaz'Mariee

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