Page 46 (7 panels)
Page 46 panel 1
Medium shot. Shaw keeps gaping. Aaron finally turns and looks up in the angel's direction.
Shaw: Oh my God.
Aaron: What? What's going on?
Page 46 panel 2
Same shot as panel 1. Identical, except Aaron turns back to look at the sketch as if he's seen nothing unusual. Shaw just keeps gaping at the angel.
Aaron: Oh. Just one of those things.
Aaron: Bo-ring.
Shaw (caption): I feel like my whole world has turned inside-out.
Page 46 panel 3
Extreme closeup on Shaw's stunned expression. She is totally blown away by what she sees.
Shaw (caption): I believed in Heaven. I was trying to go there.
Shaw (caption): But it's one thing to believe in something...
Page 46 panel 4
Middle tier. Medium shot. Angle on the angel's face as he beams at her.
Shaw (caption): ...and it's another to have it staring you in the face.
Page 46 panel 5
Wide shot. POV behind Shaw, shooting over her shoulder as she gazes at the hovering angel.
Shaw (caption): Now, for the first time in my life, I know.
Shaw (caption): I know for a fact that Heaven exists.
Page 46 panel 6
Medium 2-shot. Shaw still gazes at the angel. Aaron still stares at the sketch, trying to look like he's not paying attention to the heavenly creature floating in midair before him.
Shaw (caption): Now what?
Aaron: Maybe he's come to take us with him. Hell of a shortcut, huh?
Shaw: Or not.
Page 46 panel 7
Closeup on the angel as he dons his golden helmet. His smile takes on a more sinister edge as he slides the helmet onto his head.
Aaron (off-panel): Why? What makes you say that, Shaw?
Page 47 (5 panels)
Page 47 panel 1
Wide shot. Shaw and Aaron both look up at the angel now. They're in his shadow, engulfed by it. Shaw pulls Aaron back by the elbow, away from the flag and plaque.
Shaw: Get to the stairway, Aaron. Fast as you can.
Shaw (caption): Even as I say it...
Page 47 panel 2
Medium shot. The angel, with his helmet on, raises the fiery sword, ready to attack. The sun blazes behind him, glinting off his armor.
Shaw (caption): ...I realize it's too late.
Page 47 panel 3
Middle and bottom tiers. Big panel, two-thirds of the page, with insets. Wide shot of the angel soaring toward Shaw and Aaron, brandishing his sword...still beaming beatifically. Shaw's POV as he rockets toward her at frightening speed.
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Hell's Treasure (Graphic Novel Script)
FantasyMeet Shaw Serling, a 16-year-old girl who can tap into the mystic inner power of architecture. A boy named Aaron, who has a similar link to great works of art, leads her on a quest to break into Heaven in search of her dead parents. But the Heave...
