Good News, Bad News By: Sneaky_Jack
Reads- 750
Votes- 42
Comments- 62
Romance and Humor
First update- March 8, 2012
Last Update- April 22, 2012
9 pages (11 parts)
Summary:
Hey girls! Guess what? Guys don't always have it as easy as you think. Sure we don't have to deal with "girl problems" but we have our own problems. This is the story of how I deal with these problems.
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I honestly think this could use some rethinking based on the summary. I'm not really getting what your selling.
The summary makes you think that it is going to be some kind of guide set up even though you said it was going to be a story.
It wasn't written in a traditional story format, but that's not a bad thing. The story is going along more like a written play with the dialogue carrying the story. But I don't think the dialogue is really strong enough to do that. I suggest adding detail, like the descriptions and such.
I like your idea of wanting to show that guys don't have it as easy as 'some' Wattpad stories suggest when it comes to relationships and other personal matters.
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