Name: The Life of Hailey Kendrick
Writer: 00rose00
Description: I knew he was dangerous, I knkew what he was capable of, but did I care? No. It's funny how your heart has so much more control than your brain. I should have said "thank you." And walked away, I shouldn't have let my heart tell me what to do. But was it worth it? Was it worth all of the danger, heartache, and sacrifices? Yes. I love him, I love all his sarcastic remarks, his dangerous vibe, his loving side. But I had all that taken away from me, because of one stupid mistake, that mistake changed my life.
First thoughts: Looks pretty interesting, well written, has the reader hooked before you even start reading.
In conclusion: The story moved on WAY too quickly, I mean, the person starting to like the other after like the 8th chapter, is decent. For falling in love, the 20th chapter sounds pretty good. But in the end, it's really cute and cliche. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes, but really well written.
Rating (on a scale of 1 - 10): I give it a 6.
