The Dark Queen

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The Dark Queen by BuckWolvnoosier

Total Read- 139

Total Votes- 21

Total comments- 38

April 6, 2012

PG-13

5 pages (2 parts)

Fantasy and Watty Awards 2012

Summary:

At a young age, Princess Serefina has been bound to Gladys, a woman more commonly known as, the Dark Queen. She is the living entity of the dark side of magic, which intricately binds their world together. Gladys is seen as evil, manipulative, and powerful, and when Serefina finally learns the truth about magic, will she be ready for her upcoming task? Serefina is the future Dark Queen and it is up to Gladys to train the young princess before she dies. War, betrayal, magic, and love all come together in the world of Liseria. Will Serefina prevail, or will the world as she knows it end?


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I was disappointed  after reading this story. Why?

Because I had created and when I made it to the last page of the update, only then did I realize that I would have to wait to read more.

The characters are very realistic. The flow is silky smooth. The Vocabulary levels with someone who paid attention in school.

This is the making of a great story and maybe one day a great published work.

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